Reviews for The Ball
Snavej chapter 7 . 4/8/2015
So really I liked this, but why is it all centred?
KinanaLovesCobra chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
Kanichiwa! I am in I love this your story is amazing I truly wish I had as much talent as you! *sniffles* I can't write to save my life. Also can you draw or find a pic of the dress? That would be cool. Sorry I need more. IMAGINATION!
StormDragonfly chapter 7 . 12/8/2014
I like that you saved the sex until after the emergency was over. :) Certainly a lot of survival situations I've never taken the time to think about. Scary and valid. Good build up.
Iloveanimex chapter 4 . 8/31/2014
so she was wearing clothes? LOL! DID NARU DRESS HER! Wonder how long hes been waiting to do that! And yeah, I get where Mai's coming from xD If someone woke me up, I would swear at them too xD
Iloveanimex chapter 2 . 8/30/2014
theres not going to be much of that dress by the end... lol, XD
Iloveanimex chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
omg amazing
PopcornBird221 chapter 7 . 7/12/2014
THIS IS GREAT! XD
TheCurat0r chapter 5 . 7/2/2014
Good chapter. I'm surprised Mai would do that in such close quarters, but desperation makes people desperate...
TheCurat0r chapter 4 . 7/2/2014
Aw. Those two.
TheCurat0r chapter 3 . 7/2/2014
Good chapter.
TheCurat0r chapter 2 . 7/2/2014
I wonder if Naru will bring out his "friend" again to help distract Mai.
TheCurat0r chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Dun dun dun! Good start. )
CrazyAnimeFan1228 chapter 7 . 4/19/2014
LOOOOVVVVVE this FanFic! Please write another story soon.
Thanks!
Death The Girl 182 chapter 4 . 3/20/2014
this is the cutest fic EVER
Iloveanimex chapter 7 . 1/1/2014
LOL haha I'm kind of surprised it took him that long to take her
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