Reviews for The Ball |
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Snavej chapter 7 . 4/8/2015 So really I liked this, but why is it all centred? |
KinanaLovesCobra chapter 1 . 1/5/2015 Kanichiwa! I am in I love this your story is amazing I truly wish I had as much talent as you! *sniffles* I can't write to save my life. Also can you draw or find a pic of the dress? That would be cool. Sorry I need more. IMAGINATION! |
StormDragonfly chapter 7 . 12/8/2014 I like that you saved the sex until after the emergency was over. :) Certainly a lot of survival situations I've never taken the time to think about. Scary and valid. Good build up. |
Iloveanimex chapter 4 . 8/31/2014 so she was wearing clothes? LOL! DID NARU DRESS HER! Wonder how long hes been waiting to do that! And yeah, I get where Mai's coming from xD If someone woke me up, I would swear at them too xD |
Iloveanimex chapter 2 . 8/30/2014 theres not going to be much of that dress by the end... lol, XD |
Iloveanimex chapter 1 . 8/30/2014 omg amazing |
PopcornBird221 chapter 7 . 7/12/2014 THIS IS GREAT! XD |
TheCurat0r chapter 5 . 7/2/2014 Good chapter. I'm surprised Mai would do that in such close quarters, but desperation makes people desperate... |
TheCurat0r chapter 4 . 7/2/2014 Aw. Those two. |
TheCurat0r chapter 3 . 7/2/2014 Good chapter. |
TheCurat0r chapter 2 . 7/2/2014 I wonder if Naru will bring out his "friend" again to help distract Mai. |
TheCurat0r chapter 1 . 7/2/2014 Dun dun dun! Good start. ) |
CrazyAnimeFan1228 chapter 7 . 4/19/2014 LOOOOVVVVVE this FanFic! Please write another story soon. Thanks! |
Death The Girl 182 chapter 4 . 3/20/2014 this is the cutest fic EVER |
Iloveanimex chapter 7 . 1/1/2014 LOL haha I'm kind of surprised it took him that long to take her |