Wow...just Wow damn that was a king of all akane bashings in FFN

Well I rather enjoyed this.

Wow... a side of Kasumi I never imagined. Akane, now, I can see. I always felt she protested too damned much over the behavior of "perverts" and all. She got what she deserved. Even if manga and anime is, for the most part, done with tongue-in-cheek slapstick comedy as some readers claim, being an abusive bully is not funny. However, that is simply my own humble opinion and I'm just one Old Bet.

Thanks for sharing this insightful little one-shot.

in the end you have said that ukyo and kasumi are the best girl for ranma for none of the girls and i mean all the girls he knew are best for him because none of them understand him

I think I would have liked it more if it was a bit more believable XD But from a humor stand point it's very funny to read. Coming into a story with that many different things going on all in one go is a little jarring, I think maybe if you had done it as a multi chaptered story it might have been even better. Good though and I hope you keep writing.

Awesome. I have to agree with you about Kasumi and Ukyo. I do like Shampoo, but I agree that she got to much screen time. I don't like Ranma/Akane pairing unless it is one where Akane was never an abusive bitch, and had self-conrol.

Nice little fic. I read some of the other reviews and I'm not sure what the more critical of them are smoking. Fanfiction is by definition AU and OOC. Not that AU and OOC are bad, after I found Ranma fanfics I went and read some of the manga, Boring! And the way some critics could not spell or get their grammar right says alot really. Ranma is claimed to be a "romantic martial arts comedy". I see it more as a tragedy or maybe a satire on the Japanese "honor system". I'm not japanese, I'm american but if Ranma reflects japanese honor reliably then they are really insane. From what I have read the only people with any claim to honor in Ranma are those not living in Nerima. Here we would have social services intervening on behalf of most of the children in the manga. Quite a few "adults" would be jailed or put away.

PS "Slapstick" humor is not really funny, I find nothing to laugh about in others pain.

Love the fic, ignore the critics and just write. :)

Okay that was different. Also its so rare to find a pairing between Kasumi and Ranma, oddly they are perfect for each other.

I personally you went a bit far with Akane, sure she has a short temper and her mind is to active about sex (makes you wonder?), but I would have limited to have her cheat with a single guy like Ryoga (personally never Kuno).

haha good work with this oneshot. fck the akane fans ranma is better than her in any way.

Excellent fic, I love it. Also good Akane bashing.

good job. i think that you did it right as i think that the only people worthy for ranma are ukyo kasumi and hinoko 'course i'm predjudiced so i don't count :P however _ i'm also think that the majority of the charaters are OOC so mabye i do... naw

I have to agree with you on Kasumi, The way she is, if you watch her face in the episode where they learned about the Neko-ken you'll see that she was mad at Genma.

This was a good little story. Thanks for sharing.

hmm it would take a blind person to be an Akane fan. She is an utter bitch and is the most self rightous person I have ever seen in a story. I could see her cheating cause you know what they say when some one is so adament about their other cheating usually means that they are the one who is cheating and using that to make them selves feel better

Great story Ranko! Even though i am a huge Ranma/Akane fan i do have to admit that Ranma and Kasumi would make a lovely couple. And you are right, kasumi does deserve alot more.

I have a interesting little plot bunny I let out when I decided to release virtually all my plot bunnies as part of my New Year Resolutions.

Have a look at Story ID 5626972, specifically the first one.

Kasumi, in all reality, is the one who is suffering in a major way...

She's barely part of her own family...