my opinion love , to me it's a masterpiece. beautiful and wonderfully written. i enjoyed it.

oooh sweet and hot

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That was spicy. Hot damn you're a master at building tension.

Very nice! I read this on Dokuga and loved it. Inuyasha’s uninvited interjections and translations from the living room into Sess and Kag’s conversation is hilarious!
“Oi, we aren’t fxxxing vampires!”
I would’ve been very...displeased “Meaning he would’ve gone on a homicidal rampage” ROTFL. Thanks for sharing :)

I loved this short story!

Nice.

Lol, love the ending. Good story.

I'm so happy I found this story again. This was an interesting story. For something that is sort of a one-shot, the plot was still there and put together really well. Amazing job. Enjoyed every word.

loved it!

I really liked this. Great job!

amazing.. except i am not a 'kiddies' as u put it.

this was awesome! it showed a sweet side to sess and thats what i love the most! keep up the fantastic work!

I was totally expecting this chapter to be mostly fighting or Naraku escaping and getting her again but I was pleased it was just a big lemon instead :)

Wow I love this story. I expected her to be a little more shocked at finding out she was going to be his mate but I found that it fit. Also the kiss was very hot.