Amazing. Just the right amount of insight, angst, creepiness and tenderness. Actually that sentence seems strange now that I read it but that's what I felt about it. Great job

Interesting and well written but that's not a story that's a tease you set up the end like it was going somewhere. You don't end a story with "tomorrow would be the day both of them would regret for a very long time to come." I can over look the way you end the Sylar/Claire section even that raises some questions, But that ending. I mean you just don't do it unless you plan on making a sequel. That is how you write to reel people in it raise a question that you can't just assume the answer to. You have establish a world here, given us a question and no story to go with it I am very disappointed.

cute and well done, interesting pairings too .