Please stop leaving your stories half way... they're really good and it's honestly disappointing to see them incomplete

Loved it, but where is the next chapter? ;)

This is amazing. I love this writing style.

I liked this it was cute and a nice view and portrayal of both characters:) Hope there's more

NO.. it was only one chapter :(.. Do you know how heartbroken I am now.. please please I am begging you.. pleading on the ground.. Write another chapter.. please :)

Next chapter please.

I really, really liked this.

I'd love to read more.

I like how you do the whole 'In which etc..' reminds me of the Winnie the Pooh chapters. You've got a GREAT writing style, in response to your note at the bottom of the story. Only I wish this one was continued. Sort of. Only a hint at the two of them together isn't it? I suppose I'm the greedy type, the ones who want more ahha :) Oh wells :) Very nice! :)

sequel!

so this story is pretty awesomesauce itself, although i must agree on the fact that the book thief was, as well. :)

i love the new writing style! very different than usual, and it's more intriguing (i find, anyway) because i want to know who is speaking which dialogue.

and the plot so far?

oh my goodness.

so, so, SO amazing. this story really has so much potential to be kick-*ss incredible, so an update would be reallyreallyreally awesome? :)

definitely alerting!

daniella

Oh, I actually noticed about the "Book Thief" thing. I thought about those little bold lines and wondered what they were reminding me of, and then I thought "My bite is rather worse than my bark" and "HimmelHeaven"

I'm hopeless.

Anyway, I like the idea of Scorpius drawing her and her getting ticked off as they play mind games with each other. :)

this was amazing :-)

usually this kind of writing gets on my nerves, but it was actually really good for this story. i'd love to see where this goes - keep writing! and good job!

wow, love the writing style. very engaging. and i like the development of the characters, cause im so tired of the overly dramatic and hateful hate-to-love stories about these two. like, cant they just be two people who go to the same school? and i think their parents are over their hate for each other by now.

I liked this a lot! it was a really fresh idea!

It's brilliant! I love it so far and the style is unusual but good. Can't wait to read more. :)