Holy crap- intense! Though you'd think Nagato wouldn't have been so quick to run off in tears when Kyon hadn't even answered her properly. I don't know why I love "bad endings" like this, but kudos.

This makes me tear up when reading with 'Never Meant to Belong' in the background.

It's sad how they all died :(

Good story

Well done. Exactly what I'd expect from an experienced writer. Though sad, it's still good to read.

The characters, were certainly off, and there was a lack of supporting details.

But I must say, you have good foreshadowing and writing abilities.

Keep writing!

Simply an amazing poetic mix of beauty and despair.

Gah, that almost made me physically cry. Great job.

that was great! sad, but well written.

Wow. That was actually quite good! Sad, but darn good!