No! Lollipop!
You didn't show the kiss scene!

Squeeeeeeeee!

That was so beautifully written! I loved every second of that.

Love it! Please write more like this a sick Sasuke is too cute!

I loved it!

I was crying from laughter and dying from cuteness! Great great job!

I feel like you wrote this whole story so you'd have a reason to say " prices Kut so low, it must be genjutsu" LOL! Cute and corny :)

Your drabbles are so cute, I love them!

awsome one-shot

BEST STORY EVER~

I 3 how you did the transitions!

AWESOME~~~~

BEST STORY!

SWEET

Lmao! You're like the master of puns! I respect that!

"The prices are Kut so low, it must be genjutsu"! LMAO!

That was highly entertaining and funny. Thank you for posting this.

so funny! love ur stories!

That was adorable and lovely and very extremely un-cliche and just a tad yucky. Due to the mentality, "Ew, who would kiss someone when they're sick?" (even Sasuke, possibly). The way you wrote out the sections by dividing them up with "ACHOOS!" was very creative! That way the reader never tired of reading it; the narrative changed and though the story progressed with readers hanging on to every word.

It looks like you had fun with this! haha - Kunai Kuts (with the terrible slogan) and um, Choco Chakra Crunch (I tried saying that aloud with mixed results). I liked the little details, like how six - I think it was six? - of Shino's bugs helped pick up the napkin for Hinata when she missed it, and how she muttered, "Gomen," to no one in particular - that tells of her character more than writing, "Hinata Hyuuga was a timid girl who apologized to everyone even if it wasn't her own fault."

Wait - it was a tiny bit cliche, haha. At the near end, where there's one package of tissues left. and at the end, where she kisses him - that just seemed a little rushed. of course, all the readers were secretly vying for it anyway, so it's all good, I suppose :)

love,

-LuLu :)

oh man...this is just so cute! awesome story!