It was a good enough fic. I found it a bit too rushed but entirely, it was alright:)

This was one great story

This was well written and I like your plot. I also quite liked your version of several characters, most especially Dumbledore - he was powerful and earning of his name but also acknowledged his own flaws and had a good mindset. I was sad to see him die, as well as Sirius, McGonagall, and Krum (I wish you didn't kill them but it certainly fit). Your personal character is different but interesting, and I liked the subtle changes you made to the original storyline. For someone who knows the books well, I enjoyed seeing how your Harry handled things differently. Thank you for an enjoyable read and happy writing!

My word! Almost all character deaths?!

Super emo Daphne?

Nice story! Thanks

At this point i like how you are treating this as an actual book.. but at the same time.. there isn’t much going on... if that makes some sense...i know you already completed this story but i feel like there are things lacking in the story... there’s almost an arrogant tame air around him..

FINALLY! Harry and Daphne!

I think that Daphne is being absolutely ridikuloue!

Thank you for writing this. Loved it

Snape deserved to have his story heard but sadly he never got the chance. I would hate to be Daphne with the burden of Snape's memories to live with. Great story.

nice

Sigh... And of course Harry just ended in the same compartment as Hermione and they immediately became friends, how original...
And then there is Ron, you obviously don't like him (I don't either) but at least try to make some kind of excuse for your dislike because Harry had no reason to be that petty to him when the boy hadn't done anything.

This was a very pleasant read. The romance, the overall story, the battles, pretty much everything, all well written. While it may not be the case that the deaths that happened were a nice thing, I do believe they improved this story by quite a margin. Not a lot of writers have the balls to kill their characters. The only regret I have about reading this excellent story is that I read it all in one go and that it's now 3pm. Alas, the story was simply too good. I regret nothing.

Daphne is lying and keeping secrets of that magnitude from Harry? Well, that relationship is unfortunately doomed. I was actually rooting for them because it seemed as if her feelings were as genuine as Harry's were. I thought she truly did come to love him :l