| Reviews for The step daughter |
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   ddddaaaae chapter 1 . 4/14/2018 sesshomaruandrin . blogspot . com sesshomaruandkagura . blogspot . com |
| overninethousand chapter 1 . 9/24/2013 this; sesshomaruandrinfaq . blogspot . com sesshomaruandkagurafaq . blogspot . com |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2013 it's great! I love your story |
| DaddysLiitleGirl chapter 1 . 2/1/2013 That ANNOYING LITTLE BITCH! GOLD-DIGGER! |
| Anana553 chapter 4 . 3/13/2011 oh so she's not pregnant lol xD still awesome loved this fic spoiled rin lol xD |
| Anana553 chapter 3 . 3/13/2011 ahhh little brat yay kagura's pregnant xD |
| Anana553 chapter 2 . 3/13/2011 i'm not sure what's up with kagura's condition but i think it's going to be cleared up later in the story . ahh rin you spoiled brat lol inuyasha and kagome xD can't w8 to see what's next |
| Anana553 chapter 1 . 3/13/2011 it's so interesting to see rin in the bitchy teenager position xD seems like a cool story so far but which of your stories isn't cool, really now |
| candyredlove chapter 4 . 12/6/2010 omg is there a sequel? |
| Syzhale chapter 4 . 8/22/2010 It was an overall nice fanfic. I'd give it a 7/10. Even though OOC, there's just something about Rin in certain types of stories that irks me to no end. Can't place my finger on it though. Nothing against her, but I just don't know. Anywho, Rin jumped to conclusions and was a total jerk, but she ended up getting what was coming to her. Then ended up being rewarded... Still though, not bad of a fanfic. ~Syz |
| Syzhale chapter 3 . 8/22/2010 Rin is such a brat. Heh. Well, time to read that final chapter. ~Syz |
| Syzhale chapter 2 . 8/22/2010 I'm truly interested in this story. I remember way back when when you said you wanted to do a story on an OOC Rin. Heh. On to the next chapter. ~Syz |
| Syzhale chapter 1 . 8/22/2010 I never even noticed this story believe it or not. *Fails as a fan* OOC Rin. Funny. ~Syz |
| Rudhu chapter 1 . 5/8/2010 Hahaha...Rin is such a big devil in such a little package. I'd be really annoyed if someone spoke to me like that and would of probably ended up tearing them to pieces. But, it's Kagura we're talking about here so I am sure that she'll be able to take care of the little brat. The whole situation just reminds me of Candace and Jeremy's sister's relationship in Phineas and Ferb. |
| Malimalindamangahotmail.com chapter 4 . 1/2/2010 Pleaz write back! No offence to u(srsly no offence)...this story was..horrible! I have read a LOT of fanfics and i have never read one so horrible! I mean...why can't that annoying brat get...in to trouble along with lots and lots and lots and lots of pain! Like...she yells at kagura, says something really mean, her dad over herd it, she gets grounded(when they were in the mountains)but her dad yells at her, and gets really mad at her first... and when she ran away...falls of a really really really really super high cliff... and can't move or talk for the rest of her life! Now that's a good story! Not that urs wasn't! It just wasn't very...satisfying. I mean rin didn't get what she deserved! Pleaz write back!:) |
