This was powerful. I admit I cried like a baby while reading it. While the characters are fictional, what they were going through is so real. I love that the found a way to work through it and not give up like so many people today. Thanks for writing and sharing this.

This story made me cry at certain points that hit a little close to home, although Jazz and Prowl were going through much worse problems than me. I was so happy to see how they worked out their differences in the end and it seemed so realistic that it took several tries before they really made up. This was very well-written.

Amazing!

This is a well write story that has the good and the bad. I have to admit this is one of very few stories that I have read that deal with an on going issue in our society to this day. Very few authors write this and even fewer get it right. Many look at only one side. This was a very well written "Roller Coaster" story. It is a perfect example of why many relationships today, do not work for the better. We do not communicate with our partner. We assume that the other will figure it out and in turn it makes it worse. We try to fix what is wrong, but try to fix it with the wrong ideas in mind or with the wrong assumuptions. We end up angry, we storm off, usually do something stupid and ultimately 5/10 end the relationship.

Anyway, enough with the ranting about us as people.

I am glad this ended on a good note. I am glad that Jazz and Prowl are working through their problems and I wish them the best. I would have loved to see another chapter or two and seen how things worked out with the rest of trip and see how things were once they got back to the Ark. But in the end I am more then happy I got to read a happy ending.

Well done and best of luck with your future stories.
CatsPrivateBedroom

Ordinarily I'm rather 'meh' about these two, but this story was exceptionally well written. You did very well in illustrating a common problem with long-term relation ships (the breakdown in communication), and how they worked to overcome it.

This was an amazing read. :) I like how you created Jazz's and Prowl's personal, well for the lack of a better term, problems (like Jazz thinking he's too sentimental, Prowl thinking he's too boring etc.) and still manage to capture their characterization. Awesome work.

THis fic reminds me of somethin' that's happened t' me in real life...

Only I didn't get a happy endin'...

I'm glad ya wrote this, tho'. It did me more good than ya know t' read this.

This is such a great story - it's a really realistic and in depth exposition of just what hard work relationships can be between two very sensitive opposites. Jazz and Prowl so often just cruise along with no worries simply because they are bonded.

I'm sure this is far more how it would be - and highlights some of the difficulties there can be with bonds, generally. I've always seen bonds as more like marriage than an automatic link to harmony. I also agree they can be dissolved.

Good the reactions of everyone else around them too - also very credible and well done. A useful, accurate and in depth character analysis here for many readers, I'm sure.

Loved this story from when I first read it on PxJ, glad it's over here too so I can read it again!

Gah! I feel so bad I left this go so long without reading or reviewing it It's been sitting in my inbox because I was so sure I'd love it and I wanted to give it the time it deserved...well I finally have that time and I'm definitely in love with it XDD

It's nice to see some turmoil in a relationship for a change instead of the "it's all good" mentality that seems to be plaguing the fandom at the moment (I'll admit I fall in that category too...I'm such a hypocrite sometimes lol).

Anyway I'm going to keep going now...was awesomely written; you convey emotions well. I'm super thrilled you threw Ratchet/Lambo Twins in...I just love them together (points towards Ryagelle's fics) and it seems like it's just not that common. (You're doing all kinds of awesome outside of the box things with this huh? lol _) I wish I could nudge you towards writing one centered on them...*nudge* but I've managed to go completely off topic now so I'll just leave it at that XD

I finally managed to read this last part!

Aw!

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that was good! wow~ I wanted to cry at the end I was so happy for them!

*wants to cry* meh~ now I want to talk to my boyfriend. . . this made me think just how broken our relationship has gotten. . .*fox ears flatten* Nicely written though!~hopes reading all these PXJ stories will help with writing my own~

A beautiful finish! All insecurities and worries were brought out and discussed nicely, and your writing style really helps to enhance their get-together. It's great that Jazz and Prowl have renewed and strengthened their love. Fantastic job with this fic!

Happy New Year!

- Refracted Imagination

aww! good ending, and wonderful tie-together! thanks for the good story!

I have no idea why I only stumbled over this fic now.

I found this as wise as it is cute. A lovely read, to sum it up.