Hello? I thought they had elemental powers? They never used it. The character settings in the prologue are basically useless. And the romance development is a little illogical.

So will Charlie being a wizard not be explained?

I can see your plot and I like it it's just in the execution part where you missed the mark but overall it's pretty good had to go back to this story to send my opinion

life debts are a thing in the magical world. everyone in the world owes him at least one because he killed voldemort. as did all muggles owe one to albus for taking out gellert.

All right, the mistakes and ridiculous things in this story have reached levels too high to be ignored any more. First it's a carving of an owl, not a craving. Next, they are RUNES, not ruins! You used that one multiple times. If you don't know the difference, you shouldn't be writing a Harry Potter story anyway. Next, why in the world are they removing their clothes to change into wolves? I know the Quileutes do it, but have you read the Harry Potter books? Because wizards do not. Wizards who turn into animals (animagi) and back are able to do so while wearing clothing. So removing their clothes is completely unnecessary. And I have to agree with the others who have commented that under no circumstances would they be allowed to bring a baby to high school with them every day. No. Never. It isn't done. Harry would be required to find child care like any other parent. Since he has house elves, it doesn't seem to be an issue. Or he could hire a nanny.

How are they allowed to bring Teddy to school?

Sigh... another submissive Harry? Seriously warn your readers. Not everyone likes reading about it. Just because you’re gay doesn’t mean you have to be some spineless sub of a human. Jesus.

I like this, but it's still not explain What and Why the Volturi afraid with Harry? is it because Voldie (when war with dark creatures) or cause MoD?

Please don't do Harry x Edward

Um... another math class? Why a much more advanced math all of a sudden?

This is weird... even for a slash fic. And I ship all the yaoi stuff

What's the song? You never say.

Okay, so last chapter they had to take off their clothes before they changed into wolves. Now in this chapter Draco turns from a wolf back into a human and he's still wearing his clothes. MAKE UP YOUR FREAKIN' MIND! You can't have it both ways, not without some sort of explanation.

hmmm... interesting. I like the way you write.

Ok my biggest question is why they showed up with a baby? No way a teacher would let a baby be in their class. To much of a distraction and the kid could get hurt. Not to mention the school itself unless it has a daycare would not have such a liability. This has been plaguing me so much that I can't continue reading since the whole bring a baby to school just so it moves the confusing plot along is to far fetched (How I know schools wont let babies in the classroom? I went to a HS that had a daycare. The kids were never allowed into the regular classrooms for the reasons I gave. not to mention they screamed, cried and stank. No one liked having a class by the daycare room)