Please finish this amazing story. Orihime and Ichigo have the patience of saints. I know if I were Orihime I would make a move on Ichigo by now. :)

You take the Soul thing to a whole new level. Not that I blame you when Fullbring brought such a tempting concept that was never really fully explored and taken advantage of. It's a testament to my KHR experience that I didn't even blink at the mention of dinosaurs inhabiting the King's Realm and being more superior to humans.

i honestly don't know what to say.. _ confuzzed maybe..

I completely understand what you are saying, I'm just glad you'll continue it; almost all the stories that were started little over two years ago and aren't completed are usually never going to be, so I'm glad with your resolve to finish it!

I've had this on my list for quite some time, never getting the chance to read it and I'm quite glad I did because it was well worth it; although you should probably consider putting this message in the first chapter;

That way people like me who, read the whole thing only to find it's not finished just yet and we'll have to reread and wait for updates of things we'll already see.

It's like a giagantic spoiler, Lol.

I hope things are going better in your life, I myself have gone through that stage in life and my writing kept me here long enough to find a stone in real life to do so.

Update soon please D

I am proud of you for overcoming your darkness. God bless and live your life to the fullest.

Love the story btw

I'm really happy to see you are revamping this story. The first two chapters were kind of confusing, but as I continued reading the plot really turned out nicely. Another thing I found confusing was how Orihime knew about the king possibly being dead? It started with Akiko being kicked out her colony and then suddenly Orihime knowing and leaving... but you didn't really explain how she knew? I feel like sometimes things just aren't explained very well (like why she all of the sudden aged), but the whole idea behind the story is wonderful!

Orihime's powers remind me of the Confessors in the terry goodkind series (I'm not sure if you've ever read it but they're very similar) which is awesome. I love how the power makes her held responsible for the people/things/animals/dinosaurs she 'kills'. Another thing I loved is the way you set up her and Ichigo's relationship where he actually does have to serve and protect her, unlike before where it was purely out of friendship. It makes an interesting dynamic that they have to switch from one way to the other while coping with their feelings.

I wish there was a little more emphasis on their relationship though. Like... I know they have to struggle with their individual feelings for each other, and both of them have internal battles, but I wish there was more of it shown within the story when they interact. Like... scenarios that could potentially be cute/romantic where they both FEEL something and they want to react... but then choose not to. I think it's a lot easier to understand the dynamic of their relationship (her being of a higher status and having extreme dedication to her duty) when you write scenarios where the reader sees that they have to continue making the choice not to be together even though there are opportunities to act on their emotions. I think just showing how they both feel individually makes it be like WHAT THE HELL JUST GET TOGETHER ALREADY AND GET OVER YOURSELVES... even though I'd probably be like that anyways because you've created so much tension between them in the best possible way XD

Overall, despite all the negative criticism you give yourself in your author notes, I really did enjoy this story. The beginning was sort of confusing, but I think as you started playing out scenes that had a deeper meaning to the plot as a whole the story really developed wonderfully. I really hope you revamp this story soon, or at least update this one. I also hope you don't take anything I said as negative criticism to the story itself. I think you've done a great job at creating something that is interesting...Even though being it has complicated plot that is totally different than anything I have ever read it is fairly easy to follow. I'm really looking forward to what you're going to be doing with this story!

I'd favorite it but it looks like you'll be uploading a new story anyways... I look forward to seeing it!

I look forward to the rewrite. The chapters weren't quite as bad as you seem to think though. Good luck, and nice use of a sword of truth reference for Orihime's power, unless I'm totally insane.

you go girl! :o)

no worries. rl can be hell for most of us, we'll just be on look out for next incarnation.

its an interesting fic. I'm really hoping for at least an ichihime liplock... this may be their last mission, they can die at any time-no more lifetimes left to waste. I get self-sacrifice, but the mission won't be derailed if they finally allow themselves to give in to their feelings before they walk into the upcoming meat-grinder battles. Not feeling that sense of urgency from these characters people would feel.

Boy was that deep or what? Lol. Great chapter, keep up the good work. When are they gonna get together? Latr

oh goodness gracious! my boyfriend can't understand why I laughed so suddenly. Can you imagine if I said I'm laughing because "I'm reading an IchiHime fanfiction that has Morgan Freeman in it." He looked so confuddled as it was, poor thing.

LOL that was a good twist in such a serious story. In such a seriously, well written and completely mind blowing story ]

Keep up the fantastic work, just please update quicker.

Cheers, ~Snow-chan

Finally! Thank you Musaru! Those idiots would have kept beating around the bush for ANOTHER 500 years.

Keep up th grea work!

Seems pretty interesting so far

As they say, "Long live the King" or something like that.

The Plot thickens.

I'll give you 7/10 for this chapter. Which is a good one too.