Poor Toris. Interesting pairing. I feel sorry for Arthur though. Nice story. Well done. :)

7 years later... I love this, a love triangle in which Arthur is the one suffering, just perfect !

Woah. This is a really great story. It was really sad though, I brought tears to my eyes!

er...question:

will you EVER finish this?

hopefully yeas

Damn. I almost cried. Because I felt bad. For Lithuania. Not England, he can go to hell. I LOVE THE STORY :D

Gosh. Just when I'm finally going to read through some of these, the ones I pick are all long! So I found a short one. xD

But that was terrible. ;A;

You can be really cruel sometimes, but variety is good for character development I suppose. But still. /3

"It was as though Arthur didn’t exist in that moment. He didn't matter anymore. France didn't need him. He had found someone else. "

Poor artie, ..But for once, he dosen't have francis' full attention, love and devotion P more like he has to fight for francis, which is a nice change from the usual francis-arthur-alfred triangle lol.

Yes~! XD

Just as I began writing a France/Lithuania, I find one to read! I love it, and poor Arthur. I hope this will continue 'cause I can definetely see some room for plot development. And! I really wanna read some more FrancexLiet!

Great Job! :D

I... am not sure what exactly to think of this story. It's good, but a bit off-putting for reasons I can't really say. It might be because it's a pairing I don't really understand with Toris and all that, or that it doesn't quite click with my mental image of France. Still, it was lovley to read, and made me want to hold England close.

I did catch one error that I remembered to re-hunt down:

"Arthur was talking as those Lithuania wasn’t even in the room," 'though' instead of 'though'

asides from the fact that i started craving the song stab my back and started listening to it while reading this (it seriously fits) and asides from the fact that this story was a whole shitload of awesome in a bucket...

i seriously loved that. something i must point out. i would have liked to see Russia actually in this, if only for the reason that the dynamic would have been fascinating, cause obviously, he wouldn't have threatened france had he not loved liet in his own twisted way. there's actually alot of people you could have done this in the perspective of... but that doesn't change the fact that it's a crap load of awesome. it's good as is~

and dear god do i feel sorry for iggy. mostly because i want him with france and i doubt liet could ever make that pervert truly happy. and never mind that, but wouldn't liet do the same thing? if france made him sad, he'd kill himself, i know it. not the point i geuss.

i love it~ there's a reason your my fav author~ i want to be friends with you!

Weird pairing, but somehow...it kinda works...a little. Lol, trying to get used to a Liet/France fling. But I really like this story so far, really enjoyed reading it! Please write more!

Am I like... the luckiest person ever or what?

The day I join the FrancexLithuania comm on lj, you post THIS! You have NO idea how excited I am for this!

And you got me to read a love triangle! LOVE TRIANGLE! I never read those. You're just tearing down my limits one by one D: (is this good or bad).

Excellent. My heart strings are taut from all the pulling this fic has started doing... and it's only chapter 1. Just... argh, MAKE ME CRY AGAIN LIKE YOU DID WITH DIVINE INTERVENTION! Oh my goodness you're an amazing writer, don't ever stop.

I know this probably won't have a happy ending but... for once, I don't really care! I'm in it for your writing! I love it! Please update soon! I'll be waiting!