| Reviews for Pitty Ice |
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   drm9473 chapter 1 . 7/13 this is sweet |
| kissmekim chapter 1 . 9/14/2017 sigh, schoolyard romances, so awkward yet so sweet |
| Obs. B chapter 1 . 12/4/2015 I loved this! It was so charming and the way the events mirrored those of N&S was endearing and funny in how subtly they were done. Very nice! Also your intro to it made me laugh So. Hard. "You've seen Victorian! N&S. You've seen Forced Marriage! N&S. You've seen Modern! N&S, but you have never seen Playground! N&S." So great! I only disagree with the ages of the characters: their behavior, and most especially their dialogue. It seems more like 8 year olds than 5 year olds. I know a lot of third-graders who act like this, but no 5 year olds who talk like this. Nice story. Thanks. |
| CillaT chapter 1 . 3/9/2015 eeeeeeeeeeeh this is adorable! (': |
| eknight07 chapter 1 . 5/9/2014 Oh.. this is so sweet... I like it so much.. Young Margaret and John... so sweet... Thank you. |
| Sheherazade's Fable chapter 1 . 12/12/2013 This was so cute! |
| Serena chapter 1 . 6/24/2013 I like it, it is cute. What about if she move to london and they found each other older |
| BelleLitteraire chapter 1 . 1/7/2013 Oh goodness, you have such a knack for writing humor. This was so adorable, and enjoyable reading. |
| ADorkette chapter 1 . 9/5/2011 Adooooorable! I really loved it :) |
| aloralora chapter 1 . 8/27/2011 You are amazing! Yet another take on N&S. This is the 4th story I've read of yours. Interesting perspective. haha, the yellow rose transformed in the playground version.. Thank you again. |
| Manoella Nascimento chapter 1 . 8/21/2011 Very, very sweet. |
| Celebrytie Aris Channas chapter 1 . 7/9/2011 Okay, this one stole my heart. Absolutely adorable! Makes me wish I went to school when I was little... Thank you so much for your talent and sharing it with us all! |
| Catherine chapter 1 . 6/2/2011 I absolutely loved that story. It was so sweet and I am so happy that they finally got together. It was a good job that he was bullying her because he liked her rather than just because he was a bully. There is only one thing that annoyed me and that was not due to the writing, it was part of one of the characters, why was Ms Higgins such a bad teacher? She did not notice that Maggie was being bullied nor did she notice when Jonny’s lunch box was stolen. Bad teacher! That was the only part that I didn’t like. I realise that she had to be a bad teacher in order to have the story function, I just cannot see either of the Higgins girls allowing those things to happen. :) |
| doughbird007 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011 Lol I love this fabric its so cute and endearing... I never knew such a angst story could become so light hearted...thanx for the read :) |
| felucca chapter 1 . 4/28/2011 Ahhhh... this was sooooooo cute! Maggy and Johnny are just so adorable I just couldn't help grinning and picturing it on my head this cute little couple! Playground N&S, what a striking idea. I just can't help but thinking if you could make it a series! Enjoyed much thanks for posting*** |
