D'aww, that was too sweet! I liked the theme you used for this one-shot, because such things happen a lot lately.

You did have a typo here and there, though. I believe that "brunette" should be for girls with brown hair, while 'brunet' is for guys. But other than that it's really good!

This was nice :)

The part where her breath was gross in a romantic way was hilarious :)

At first, i thought this was weak and a little corny; it wasnt until Sora began to rant, however, that this really touched me. great job :D

cute that was

this story is not my type, i do not read , it was well written, the use of vocab to describe the scene deserves an applause. The storyline is about a boy like girl, but he doesnt admit it, he gives a mystery about his love for the girl. WEll DONE:)

Haha, I liked the ending Seifer just needs to go fall into the Grand Canyon xD This was really good, I like it

~Tanu

WOOT! SWEET! xD

Very Cute...I need to play this game again, too bad my brothers screwed up the disk. :( I hate them. Hmmph!

Thankies for the story!

OSK