I like Kain trainheart's idea. add a little torture into it. maybe add a aphrodisiac. make him panic

Well, grimmjow could run to the world of the living which would give there other the chance to get some human torture toys like the pear which is a middle evil torture object. Also the stuff from my black cat story would work as will, dressing grimmjow up like a neko or shock toys or so on. Its my second story that has the stuff.

kukuku i can't wait to see what ulq has in store for grimmy~

please make ulqi make grimmy suffer more pain and lust and maybe let some others play with him!

i'm not very picky. i am enjoying this story so far. i personally like dark and violent yaoi but i do enjoy nicer storys as long as they are written well. and so far i think you write very well. keep up the good work. :)

Hey! I like this fic, though I had some trouble in understanding some parts, but yeah, it's ok. In the next chapter, I think you should write about Ulquiorra capturing Grimmjow and making him know his place, by gorce if necessary ... Grimmjow is always too proud, so he needs to learn some things...

Haha, poor Grimmy

LOL

i don't know what to say... this is some strange fic you've got here xD

but COOL~~

those little things you've got in the beggining? continue them 8D

this is really interesting xD you just put them all being horny evildoers xD i laughed with this xD

you want ideas? read your author's note xD get Ulqui to catch Grimmykins and put some bondage on it xD

he can run...but he can't hide...xD

dunno, maybe a chase?you can't rape them all xD (oh wait, you can xD )

Ulqui chases Grimm to the top tower; Grimm can't run; he gets him; :3 ; *thingy-thingy* ;

just... can you please make a happy ending? xD

Yummy

I don't know many ffs with Ulquiorra as Seme...sadly...You'r story is simply amazing

Why don't you let Ulqi find Grimmi?

hin-chan

Sorry Grimmy But -drools lsightly- Its too Hot! I LOVE this story.-giggles and blushes- Its HOT!

have a threesome with azienxgrimmjawxulquiorra

I loved this! I can't wait for chapter 3! Unfortunately, I don't have any ideas to help you with the next chapter, but it'll probably kick butt anyway. Good luck with it and I hope you get it out soon!

Also please no more SzayelxGrimmjow, not that it wasn't well written but it was a bit weird :S

This was seriously fuckin hot. Like it ;D

As for the next chapter, I think Ulqi should catch Grimmy, and drag him away, but also, methinks, Grimmy should run off like a pet cat. But he could even go to the world of the living, and get hit by a car just like a real cat. But that's totally your choice. Either, this shizzle rocked my socks and I ca't wait for an update!

Awesome story :D

Hmm... as an idea i think ya should carry on with like cat and mouse.. as in Ulquiorra almost gets to grimmjow but dosent. Like hes letting grimmjow get away. But you could make it as though grimmjow keeps getting into wried and bad situations and in the end gets caught and is really annoyed xD

I could see that happing to grimmjow xD

Cant wait to see what ya get for your next chapter :D

~ McLeaf

I think it would be a nice idea to let Ulquiorra take Grimmjow by surprise ! And you could kink it up by making Ulqui blindfold Grimm and tie him up. Stuff like that.

I'm not sure how you should continue but I hope it helped (even if just a tiny tidbit)