Omg I loved this! It’s so cute!

I was wondering when Yagari would find out about them. But I was not expecting him to try to commit murder. I mean I should have expected it, after all his is Yagari we’re talking about, but it still kinda shocked me that he was gonna do it.

Zero describing his feeling for Kaname in a nutshellI can’t get him out of my head, and every time I look at him I have these pains in my chest, and I just know it’s his fault that bitch.

(And yes this is from Star Kids )

Omg-YUKI THEY’RE BANGING! That’s why they keep looking at each other like that and it’s why Zero has all of those “rashes” on his body. Also, does Yagari know about this? Bc if not I can’t wait to see what his and the Chairmen’s reaction to finding out about this are.

I love this and had to reread it again after a while. Though I am completely sad that you had to get rid of some of the content :( would of been great to be able to read the full fanfic

I do not understand the people who come in this fanfic dump a lot of shit saying that the story is bad and that the author is even worse. Stories like "Crinsom Door" get a lot of praises and things like that, people celebrating how kaname x zero the story is as if it were very good and say how good the author is (which is absurd! The author simply lies already in the proposed fanfic couple, if you have the bitch Yuki in the middle is no longer fucking KaZe), but it comes in what really is Kaname and Zero and people still complain. Can not understand. Your story is great !

This story was so beautifully written, I held my breath reading it. This story was written quite a while ago and you probably won't read this, but I have to say this: I read a lot of different Kaname x Zero stories, but this made me truly feel for the characters. It wasn't cheesy, it was sweet, the story wasn't too stretched, it was just perfect, although I would have liked to see some full lemon scenes here and there :P. Not that the story particularly needed it, but the intimate parts you didn't cut where very heartfelt and it wasn't like some of the raunchy half assed lemons I've read before. So I really enjoyed that. The fact that you didn't make Zero fall in love too soon was also realistic and nice to read. Thank you for making this story and now I need to go to bed, because I read this story in one night and it's currently 05:12 AM. Thank you~

So I actually gave the entire fic a chance even after all the reviews and I'm sad to say this fic isn't too great. :/ Maybe revise it? I donno man it is not smooth to read in a lot of areas. Some dialogue is off and you write like a tryhard teen... it just seems so ""meh""

... i remember this from years ago and now it has no smut wtf. If you edited it out why keep it up and not give us original link?

This story was really beautiful...thanks for it..

plsplspls! could you send me the original version? pls...i love ur writing, and i JUST CANT READ SOMSTHING THIS GOOD AND NOT HAVING THE FUN PART IN!PLSPLSPLS SOMEONE HELP

This is awesome! Keep up the good work, I love how the character’s personalities are portrayed so well!

t_t you removed the only good part of this story wtf...

Orz please forgive me for this but.. if you removed the smut why not direct us to a place we can read? You shouldn't really tell readers that if you don't provide :(

Amazing!~~~