This was really cute! But I do think that it could be fleshed out a bit more. It was never really explained why so many boys (and Harry!) were being so persistent in their efforts to kiss Hermione, other than her just suddenly maturing and becoming hot. Its kind of a cop out answer, maybe since I've read so many fics where people make her turn into something akin to a supermodel. The way it was written, it sounded more like this was enchanted mistletoe that influenced people to become kiss-crazed. Why else would Harry try to corner Hermione when you wrote that he only views her as his best friend and gave no other indication of feelings?
If you wanted to continue this and make it a multi-chapter piece, I can definitely see you then explaining and fleshing out this premise a bit more thoroughly.

Overall, since you said you don't write much fluff, I think you did a respectable job. Merry Christmas in July! ;D

Sweet :)

Oh my, what an adorable, lovely, and funny fanfic! I sooooooo love it! Excellent job, author!

Lol Dumbledore

*Snicker*...Yes potty what Malfoy says!...

I'd hate to be caught under that mistletoe

Awwwwwwww
cho fluffy!

I love the mistletoe idea. I really wish you would expand on this story. Maybe write about some of the other character's POV's about this.

I couldn't stop myself from smiling. Especially snape

i always love dumbledore when he does that sneaky attitudes! hahahaha XD team dumbledore!

Dumbledore you sneak haha :)

i woulnd really call that fluff it was a goood read but idk it didnt really seem like fluff but i love your other stuff i like dark

This was great! I really enjoyed this! The writing was amazing!

naw so cute. loved it!

Love it! Great Story :) (sad it was only a one-shot though)