;) ;D
yay! Hikaru finished his 1000 cranes! *whoops with joy* and wow Sai be like 'I'll wait' oh boy that scene is after my heart!
thanks for this wonderful story :D

Why? *sob* Why?*cry out* Why? *dripping wet*

Why don't you just said that Sai appears and back to Hikaru then End. ToT So close... yet so far... *sob sob*

-sniffle- that was a sad one, but I'm glad that (I'm guessing that the fan was Sai) they found one another..

yaoi? nah. it is a friendship fic. should make it into a oneshot. it will have more impact

Very touching, and definitely beautiful :)

I think this fanfiction definitely could have been longer. The idea was good, I think. Though there are improvements that could be made. But I really like the idea, and the ending, though I kinda wish there was a bit more of a build-up to the ending. But it was still good.

Good job! -

This chapter doesn't really go anywhere further eh?

But I'm waiting for the next chpo

Woo, fast updater! Poor Waya and Isumi, scolded by Hikaru~

The plot is actually interesting but shouldn't you use "where" instead of "what" in this sentence? "Continue to what he left off yesterday."

Ohh,poor was somewhat touching,I liked it,and it's ok,even if you have grammar and sppeling errors(like I do sometimes,haha) you could ask someone to beta for you.

Lovely chapter~ Good luck at writing,haha~

Honshi

Hmm... 10 paper cranes? I thought I heard that somewhere...

Anyway, I look forward for next chap

Wha- Nice idea! :) I have to admit,I never thought about such a thing..folding 10 paper cranes..Seems hard, it true?The thing with a wish coming true because of such a thing?

Well,doesn't matter,I'm waiting for the next chapter,hope you'll post it soon!

Honshi