I think a lot of these chapters could have been put together, so in the end you probably would have had three, maybe four chapters. But I understand when you write4 something and don't feel like writing anymore, you want to share it.

Anyway, I thought the whole story was cute, and the plot was good. I think you really captured Eric and Donna's character in their last conversation. I feel like Donna would have reacted that way if this had really happened, and that Eric would feel bad for cheating on her, no matter who it was with.

NOOOOOOOO! YOU CANT STOP IT THERE!

-squee- Sequel time! _

T_T retard...

Jeez, those silly boys... Oh, and in this chapter you mentioned Hyde's eyes looking bloodshot, but he doesn't take his glasses off until 8 lines down from that..just letting you know. I can't wait to finish this story _

:O Hehehe...

SecretlyBatman, I love E/H stories when they're done right...and the "it's always been you" quote was perfect.

Well done.

This was a great story! Very vivid. Just one inconsistency, during the Chrissy episode, Hyde lived with his mom so he wouldn't have had a room in the basement yet. But thats just a minor slip. I'm off to read the sequel now, can't wait!

WOW. This is amazing )