i bet they get together chap 13 cos they do in most other fanfics

cud b wrong

probably not

but

anyway…

BiebzBeWithU

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love this! :)

woot!

Awww, I was crying so much at the end! it was such a good story. it was really good and sad. I just loved it soo much, well done, great job. ;p

This is a great story! I almost cried at the ending because I can't believe they died and this story is complete. Please make more storys, I really love your writing. Bravo! bravo! well done!

I want them to know they're both in love already! Haha gosh this is such a good story, I really really love it!

But I can't wait until they both realize that it's not just pretend :)

Wow, the final review i will ever leave here. I loved the whole thing! It's deffinetly one of favorite stories! I kinda wish u would've made one more chapter between this one and 17 to give more discription of their adult lives, but it was still really good:) I like how u ended it, making something so sad peaceful instead of angsty. It was an AMAZING story! :)

That ending was so sweet and well written. I may have just shed a tear, good job.

AW. *sobs* The ending was so sad... Great job on the story thougb.

awwww this was sooo cute! i loved this! and this chapter was adorable!

the end almost made me cry :( wow what a brilliant story

Aww what a sweet chapter to read, them reliving their lives together for the children, I loved the ending it was a little bit like the notebook but it made it different to the others out there, thank you for updating and sharing this with us it was a brillant story all the way through. Thank you for giving me inspriation to write a poem while i was reading this it really helped. may you have many more fanficitons as successful as this.

Aw that was so cute! I loved it, beautiful, absolutely beautiful!

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