I laughed so hard at that last sentence! I wish there was more fics making fun of mpreg and less mpreg fics themselves.

Long and painful... Anybody wonders if it involved creating Severus's children? With Bella, or with Voldemort?
Muggles invent Marriage Law to destroy Magical Britain?

Dear Sulphur:

I'll drink to that. Nicely done.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

I just reviewed your other piece about Marriage Law, complimenting it sincerely, but this one was just as good, if not better.

I love it! I was laughing myself silly, reading it!

im so confused. . .

wow...

*laughs suddenly* A transfigured Lucius, oh my. He must be annoyed.

Great job, that was /very/ unexpected.

Regards,

Audrey

I have to admit it: I'm confused. It looks like you've got an interesting idea in Snape coming clean, but the bit about bearing Potter's children doesn't make sense to me. Last time I checked, Snape didn't have a uterus. (Granted, I don't check very often :P)

Then again, this might make sense to every other reader and you can all have a laugh at how slow I am. :)