Hey i just met you,
and this is crazy,
but we're roommates, yeah
so fuck me maybe.

I like it. :)

i'm just like 'oh, holy shit' when draco arrived

The blond suckled one of Harry's dusty nipples.

It ruined the moment for me because all I could imagine was cobwebs on Harry's nipple and a little spider hanging off it with Draco's face looking like o.O

This story needs reviewing by a beta reader. It is a shame because this story has a lot of potential, but the grammar and spelling is letting it down a lot for me.

Myself being British i notice a lot of Americanised words and it is quite annoying for a Brit to read. A LOT of people make this mistake so don't worry.

Keep going with the writing, these things come with time, you seem to have a good imagination and it takes a lot to write a fiction.

Hope i don't sound too harsh and that you take it as constructive criticism. Keep it up!

noooooo nonononono thas bad thas very very bad! TToTT

I really don't like this Harry. no wonder Draco calls him kid, Harry act like a kid. I mean seriously. And if Harry and Ron do hook up I will be so mad. I don't read Harry/Ron fan fiction. But I am going to keep reading cause despite Harry's childness I am enjoying this story.

This story is good so far. Ron seems like he is jealous and a jerk. And boy you have some grammar mistakes. You should really re-read your work before posting cause there are quite a few mistakes.

like it..interesting

Parts of it vaguely remind me of Fruits Basket... But I like this :)

much more used to Malfoy being the Cute one...

LOVE IT! I'M A MAJOR FAN OF YOURS! P.S You have minor grammatical errors and that is our only flaw! I have read it all and heading towards Chasing Rain! super excited..sorry. :D

tatu rocks!

OMG! I HAVE TO READ THE SEQUEL!

uh oh dont lose urself harry

no not the states!