I love Twilight ! ( I smiled at the Tanya Twist tho

Hmmm I wonder why she said Jake's name? Thats really a puzzler.

Ummm question how is this faor to Jake?

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That was really...creepy.

Thats me jacob you know in the movie bella having sex with that ugly monster thats not real becuas is movie even weding in real life i marry bella and she have sex with me so hard i lick shes dick even i put my dick in her dick and she she lick my dick to and wee have sex very very hard you know that.

I loved it you should make it about what happend after he left and how her life changed after what they just did ,and what
did she do with jacob when Edward left.

nasty

your cute

WOW! SO BELA LEFT EDWARD FOR JOCAB SHOCKONG

fuck u Bella seriously u had sex with Jacob the night to you wedding day and so what if Edward did the same thing u already did it too and Ur blaming him when u just told him that u want to have sex with a werewolf when u are a married man at least Edward didn't put his penis in Tanya like u di ...SLUT u even called Jacobs name and measuring Edward to Jacob at least Edward tried but u pushed it way to far sure Edward was wrong and all but dam girl u are married and want to have sex with another man 2-3 times a day and u are married married as in u choose EDWARD not Jacob to commit the rest of Ur life to u are just acting like a really horny little bitch .i really don't like people like u Bella and if u was for real really i just wanted to slap u silly come on i tried to see it from Ur point of view but i couldn't .both bellla and Edward are just rally stupid in this story a#but bella DAMMMMM

Edward was trying to figure out why Bella didn't experience pain when she sat on his cock. He figured out (with help from Bella's "Oh Jake!") that Jacob fucked Bella.

I only comment if I hate a story. This was horrible. I guess it's ok if it was a gag. I hope it was. Anyway. First of all edward would have been surprised if bella wasn't a virgin. Second of all edward would have never let bella have a the threesome with him and Jacob. Third of all edward and Jacob would have tried to kill each other if this ever happened. Forth of all edward would have never have yelled at bella. He would have been sad and angry that he wasn't enough for her. He would have beat himself up. Not take it out on her. That's all I have to say. Hope u do better next time!