This is incredibly well written, I hate it lmao fuck it’s so depressing, on god damn the fucking watch at 28, omg uhhh
This is good shit

I remember reading this on Wattpad and now that I seen it here I have to reread it. The best Death note oc in my opinion. She's funny and a bit...slow in the beginning but that's what makes her loveable because she has amazing character development threw the whole plot. I just wish the slow burn could of had a bit more of an explosion at the end if you get what i mean. That doesn't make it any less of an fantastic OC story. I found myself really feeling for her in most scenarios wether the feeling was sad,happy, nervous or in my favorite case devious (Is that an emotion?)

lol don't change anything but please update the other book to this one. I think it was called ancedote? )Please continue on with your creative word play and most importantly stay imaginative.

It's amazing what an author can grant simply by posting a few pages, once again it is in my opinion the best emotionally driven death note fanfic in the death note category.

ok i know this story hasn't been updated in 8 years but girl what is up with this oc? first of all her last name is "Blogger" (i think that speaks for itself). second of all, she's supposed to be from new york but she's constantly using southern phrases ("i havent the foggiest", "yellow", "something awful") like what even is that? third of all, i have no idea what "PS" is supposed to stand for. i even googled it and couldn't find anything. it seems to be similar to BS so why not just use that instead? i know these seem like nitpicks but they completely take me out of the story.

also, this might just be personal preference, but erin is so unlikable so far. maybe it gets better but she seems like such a try hard and is generally pretty dumb.

I was just sifting through my favourites list, wondering what I should put on my "reread next" list (whenever I can get around to it). Saw this gem and was just like "um, HECK YES!" I'll get onto it when I have the time and I CANNOT wait. I just thought I'd let you know that I still absolutely adore this fic and can't believe it's been just a year since I finished it! Also, I have read the sequel (which is AMAZING) and I just realised I never reviewed it. Sorry, I really need to do that! Have a great day or night ahead! :D

When I first started reading this, I thought it would have the ending most would think, with the main character as how she was. I don't think I've cried this much over a story in a while. You did such a crazy good job at this and I'm sooo glad I found it! You succeeded in fulfilling my Death Note fanfiction needs, while simultaneously ripping my heart out. Don't worry though, I'll recover (I hope)! I'm not the best with words, but I tried to convey my feelings to the best of my with my tear logged mind haha. You're awesome!

I must be the only person who doesn't really like this fanfiction. While I found the OC infuriating most of the time, I also thpught she was an interesting and well-developed character. My real problem was L. I just didn't like how he was portrayed in this story. I guess it's understandable since everyone has different opinions on L's character, but, I really don't believe L is such a manipulative and distant guy like this story makes him out to be. L does have human decency, I just wished it was featured more in this story.

omg i love this story so much i cried luke 6 times reading this and i finnished it in less then a day

This story is a true gem. I loved every bit of suspense and drama, even if it also killed me. L is really terrible at being a human being, isn't he?

By the way, loved the LABB reference a couple chapters back. The coffee scene is one of my favorite parts!

Anyway, really enjoyed the story. Will be reading the sequel soon.

I read this years and years ago and decided to read it again. It was even more heart-wrenching and amazing than I remembered.

All of these little details jumped out at me that I never noticed before. Like how-and I don't know if you meant it this way-how Erin screws up that Dylan Thomas poem just enough so that it almost sounds like she's inadvertently foreshadowing Light's death, and that's the thing that L chooses to correct her on. A lot of great little things like that.

The swirl of emotions in this is just so real. L means a lot to a lot of people in the fandom, and I feel like you brought him to life and did him justice on an even greater level than even the original story did. I was always so angry about the way he died, not just at the fact that he died, but at the character himself, and your story has actually given me something like closure on that.

It was perfect. Don't listen to anyone who tells you it was uncreative or whatever. Anyone who complains that Erin fainted and flew off the handle too much (even though it was very frustrating at times) didn't get the point. It doesn't matter because you injected everything into the story that it was missing-humanity-and I think if even Tsugumi Ohba ever read this, they might have to eat their heart out.

Anyway, sorry for the long review. I know you already have like 800 of them on this story, but I'd feel like an ingrate if I didn't say something after reading this and getting so much out of it (even though I've been bawling for like 30 minutes). Thank you so much for writing this.

IM SO ANGRY AT THIS STORY BUT IM ANGRY ABOUT HOW MUCH I LOVED IT. YOU HAD ME CONSTANTLY CRYING AND THEN YOU GAVE ME HOPE. THEN YOU RIPPED ALL SAID HOPE, STRAIGHT OUT OF MY CHEST AND STOMPED ON IT. NEXT, FOR EXTRA MEASURES, YOU STOMPED ON MY HEART AS WELL. FINALLY, MY EYES ARE NOW SWOLLEN AND I OFFICIALLY HAVE A BROKEN HEART. YET, I REGRET LITERALLY NOTHING.

I cannot tell you how much I love this OC. I don't know if I've ever related this much to a fictional character before. I love her.

So I finished this story in one night. I was tossing and turning in bed after a stressful night at work. When I gave up on sleep, I stumbled upon this story. I was up until 3:00 am reading.

Lemme tell you this story had me sobbing in bed until about 4:00 am. It was so good, so bittersweet. I loved the way it was written, I loved your well developed OC, and most of all I loved the way you portrayed L. Thank you for sharing your work with is.

So, I don't know exactly what to say but I just finished your story and most of it's one shots and I knew that I had to say something. I love this. I cried, I laughed and I facepalmed most of the time. I'm new to this fandom and I'm so glad that I found your work. It's phenomenal! So well written, so involving! Erin is amazing and I think you made an awesome work with this OC. The most thing that I love about you and this fanfic, it's how you made me read this till the end in a time where all that I used to love doesn't matter anymore. Thank you, it means a lot. I will now proceed to read the sequel, that I'm sure it's awesome!

T-T fwaahhhh

I'm re-reading this.
I totally forgot about this, never finished it.
Now is the time!