This is too superficial... Their time together is so brief that all this hold no water for me.

I'd just like to point out that the hot fruit/counter scene was EPIC. how did I come up with this? It's like a perfect romantic movie porney scene lol

Your writing invokes such a feeling of summertime and laughter and fun. I loved this fic, it felt like reading a journal, or personal essays, and I binged this in one night. I hope you write or consider writing professionally! Thank you for sharing!

I like when Edward is the bad guy and after finding love he chance and in this case even quit smoking.
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Great character development and beautiful love stories. Really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for a great read.

Sooo cute great ending

Knew it

I’m mad at how cute they are because I’m still mad at Edward but I forgive him so I don’t know I have mixed emotions

Hahaha love that they have to get her help

I honestly don’t wanna feel bad for Edward and I really don’t feel bad for him but he’s such a cutie with him smelling the scarf and wanting to be better for Bella and I think it’s so cute but I do not condone his behavior and I honestly hope they don’t get back together but I know they will

This sounds bad but I wish Bella just got like some meaningless boyfriend that she could take to the cabin to rub in Edwards face just to show him exactly how he did her

And this whole chapter makes me wanna fight someone and also I wish Bella called out Tanya before Tanya brought up the threesome and I wish he said some shit before he was caught in the fact that he fucked Tanya that time that she shown up what the fuck
Also at six in the morning I should be sleeping but I’ve just been reading this

The end of this chapter made me laugh because the entire chapter I was very suspicious and I didn’t think anything was real and then I was right

Seems kind of dumb to fuck in a lake but I don’t know

Damn he’s really fucking with her