| Reviews for An unfolding flower Previously titled Janto Kink |
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kathyoberbeck chapter 5 . 6/15/2017 Nice! Is this posted anywhere with the deleted scenes? |
mentallyconfused chapter 5 . 6/15/2014 As many that suit the moment |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/2/2014 Ugh God I LOVE it! It is by far the best and most well written piece of Janto fan fiction I have ever read. Now for the question that will make me sound like a total horn dog but why oh why did you take out the sex scenes? I feel like I needed a little bit of angsty Janto action to set the scene on how the dynamics of the relationship here is working but otherwise totally amazing fic! |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/11/2013 This would be great, except that all sex scenes are cut out. Still it's good story but it would be way better with those scenes. |
rocketninjaslap chapter 5 . 2/2/2012 Oh, gesh... See how long you last, like a contest. I think that's it. Also, I kinda think, since Ianto is the one who's the least steady of the two, as a way for Jack to prove to him that he cares and that Ianto isn't just some office fun, Ianto gets to top. Like really D/s top. Just a thought. I really love this, and Ianto lapdancing... not sure whether to laugh til I piss myself or take a cold shower. |
I-dont-do-calm-like-ever chapter 2 . 5/27/2011 why'd you take out the sex scene? |
I-dont-do-calm-like-ever chapter 1 . 5/27/2011 i forgot to save this as one of my favorite stories, and i lost track of it cause i forgot who write it. i spent all day yesterday searching for it, cause i wanted to read it again but couldn't find it... I finally gave up thinking I'd never see it again, perhaps the writer had deleted it. But today i decided to go through all my favorite authors and just 'see' if i could find it. You renamed it! that's why i couldn't find it haha. I'm very happy right now thank you for an epic story :):) XoXo Sarah |
childof2worlds chapter 1 . 9/10/2010 I adore your story, but I was wondering, why have all the sex scenes been cut out? |
I-dont-do-calm-like-ever chapter 5 . 7/6/2010 Loved it, I cant wait to see Ianto give Jack a lap dance, that should be fun :D:D I'm excited. :):) XoXo Sarah |
Toinette chapter 5 . 6/10/2010 I really really enjoyed reading all those chapters, I can't wait for the "stopwatch" part! I don't know if there's something to improve on your n-17 work (English is not my mother tongue, so all I can say is that it is a pleasure reading you...) but n-17 aside, I like the way you see the characters : Owen who would have sex with anyone, how Jack is a little confused about Gwen, and can't really trust Ianto completely, Ianto being cheeky enough to tell Jack the sex was (only) 'good', Toshiko flirting with Danielle... I mean, the story's great and there's absolutely nothing out of character. Oh, and did I tell you I enjoyed the biting in the shower? |
Poynters Princess chapter 5 . 6/4/2010 Omg why didn't I read this before it's bloody fantastic! Oh and for the next one :) how about seeing how long it takes for one to beg (if that makes sense) :) |
Danny Rose chapter 5 . 6/3/2010 OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG SOOOO CUTE! XD SNAIL RACES! Stopwatch fun (; You could... see how long Jack could resist Ianto's sexy arse as he lapdances... Get Owen in here... see how long Jack can resist watched Ianto give Owen a blow job. (I'd laugh.) |
Francine S chapter 5 . 6/3/2010 omg, so so hot, loved it, omg, jack and ianto in the shower is just so hot, cant wait for jacks christmas present, love jack explaining to ianto that he wasnt interested in gwen but wanted him, glad he did explain to ianto about the doctor, they are so cute, cant wait for more, especially the stopwatch, hot as |
XxTypoMasterxX chapter 5 . 6/2/2010 Oh gosh, Lap dancing Ianto sounds marvelous! Where can I get me one of those? lol |
Lesleigh chapter 5 . 6/2/2010 WOW that was a bril chapter. stopwatch will be interesting to see how you come across |