Loved it! Very sweet and fun.

this is so much love! ahh~~ why are the greatest stories the really short ones. QAQ anyways awesome job here! I love it! XD

Ha! Axel has now gotten through the Tsun side of Roxy and is now at the dere side~ XD poor Sora though~

Amg! such a cute chapter~! XD lulz poor Mansex too~ XD

this is like a blog thing! amg! it's so cute! I love the plot and how adorably smitten Axel is of Roxas! XD lo and same with Sora to Riku! xD great job~!

this..I can already tell would be awesome, this is a pretty good start~ Awesome job!

This may be old..ish but I'm reviewing it anyway!

Anywayss, this was amazing! It was cute and funny and just wonderful.

Axel...what a weirdo. I loved it. Everything he said made me laugh.

"Sora can join in! I don't mind, he's pretty cute."

Haha. That made me giggle. I could see him saying that. xD

And picturing Riku as Santa gave me a good laugh.

And Sora in an elf costume. Along with everyone else. xD

Anyway, I just wanted to say I loved it and I shall favorite noooow. :3

~Kurami-chan

Cute ending :) It was a very kawaii story and made me cheer up, the only complaint I have is Riku was a bit OOC, but that's what made it cute and funny! Don't get mad or anything! Hmm,Tidus was hilarious just randomly popping out. Yes guys, there is at least one person in the world like that and Im sad to say I know this person. *~* Riku you can't bribe kids! Especially if you rip them off!

-Momentai-

Okay so right when Axel landed with a thump on the fire escape, my mother dropped a glass bowl and I freaking jumped! Way to freak me out! Riku you cheater!~punches him repeatdly~ Cheatercheatercheatercheater! This better be some freaking horrible mishap or else Ill get you in your sleep Riku! Yay For Axel and Roxas though! ~cheesy smile~ Axel...being a fireman, kinda hot with the irony :P Too bad he's a pyro and is actually the one starting the fires!

-Momentai-

...I don't know which Santa would scare me more, Mr. Mansex trying to ask me to donate my heart to some weird kingdom or Marluxia asking me why I'm such a tomboy and insisting that I buy a new wardrobe to complement by hair yada yada. *~* Theyre both freaky in there own ways. Heh oh god, that toddler made me chuckle! "Sora get this kid off of me" I would have laughed so much If I was there! Aww poor Sora, I can sing but I know Roxas has the voice of an angel but your nice! Er..and..cuddly? ...Yeah Im gonna stop. That dressing room reminds me of ours at school for pe, I have to stand on the bench to change or go by the sinks, it's very...odd.

-Momentai-

Heh god Axel quit being a stalker! Your gonna get sprayed in the face! Roxas, Im so jealous of your petite little figure eating all the ice cream you love...Grrrr I excersize and will never be that tiny! I love you though!:) Heh Zexion has no fear...I think I would cry if I met Larxene. T_T Not even joking. Riku seems nice...let's just hope he's not a secret perv.

-Momentai-

Very cute beginning! I love the whole story being transferred to us by his blog as if were reading it, very creative and a great way to relieve me from not crying because I

so mad right now and now I'm venting and yah...GREAT! Love Axel and his retarted lines, I can totally see Roxas going beserk and aiming for a random object to Attack him heheh run Axel run! Ending was funny about the box about to fall and crush them!

-Momentai-

Haha, I just realized you were using the Loveless last names..

I'm only on chapter 2, but I wanted to make a comment on this one before I forgot! What I've red so far, I'm loving. Really, it's an interesting idea and I like the way you write. C: I'm curious as to how the rest of it goes. Also, the way Sora described Zexion's hair made me smile because that's exactly how I think of it. Silver-ish, blue-ish, and is that a hint of purple? His hair color is difficult to, well, name exactly. Lol.

Alright, back to reading now~ Can't wait to find out some more.

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