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lazybum89 chapter 1 . 6/18/2014 Fantastic story! I really enjoyed it! :-) |
Disneymagic chapter 1 . 5/5/2011 The interactions between all your characters are so realistic, complicated, humorous, heart-warming, and a joy to read. You have fantastic dialogue. I love how you've made Dean so smart even at seven years old he's very intuitive. The way he understands that Caleb is trying to get out of the house and decides to help even though he doesn't know why, he only knows that he'd do anything for his best friend, is wonderful. I have a question - Do any of the stories in this 'verse explain where the nickname 'Deuce' came from and why Caleb calls Dean that? I understand 'Runt' and Damien' but 'Deuce' has me stumped and I'm hoping there's a really great story behind it. Great story! |
Voldemort- Coolest Badguy EVER chapter 1 . 3/20/2010 Aww, this was an absolutely beautiful Christmas story. I'm a sucker for a Wee-chester story, and "Light" was no exception. I also loved seeing Caleb and Dean's brotherly moment by the fountain, which was very cute. This line near broke my heart: "Dean wasn't just apologizing to him. He was apologizing for whatever he imagined he had done to drive his father away." Little Dean is just so adorable and sad! But the "happy" ending was a nice balance to the angst and sadness. Wonderful one-shot! - Coolest Badguy EVER |
Becomingwhaturmeantobe chapter 1 . 2/1/2010 Took me a long time before I could get to read this but I loved it. Every story is warm and lovely and I adore them. Caleb is such a great character. Thanks! |
Lilly B chapter 1 . 12/22/2009 Great story...oh my gosh i was definitely feeling the panic right along with Caleb when Dean ran off...it's great how your words can take the reader right into the story like that. Fantastic story! Absolutely loved it! Merry Christmas! |
rog457 chapter 1 . 12/20/2009 I so love wee-chester stories. I love seeing how the bond between Caleb and Dean formed and grew. The line about Caleb being Dean best friend and he'd do anything for him, was a real aw moment. Terrific seeing Caleb realizing for the first time that he could use his "gift" to connect to Dean. Its amazing that even with all the other Brotherhood stories you still manage to add details to boys stories, to explain their lives and their relationship to each other. Please don't ever stop writing wee and teen chester stories. |
Morganeth Taren'drel chapter 1 . 12/19/2009 You had me running the full gambit of emotions in this one. It was absolutely beautiful and I always appreciated seeing Caleb and Mac from back then when they'd just become a family. Loved this story! |
alwaysateen chapter 1 . 12/18/2009 Amazing story. :) So cool to see Dean and Caleb help each other that way. How Dean saw through Caleb's plan and decided to help out, not even knowing that money was involve, lol. And Caleb discovering he could found Dean's light everywhere, so sweet and awesome. It made him accept his abilities a little bit more. :) I wish you and your family wonderful holidays. :) |
Foreverwolf chapter 1 . 12/18/2009 Another amazing story! I just can't get enough of the universe you have created! You and Tidia are truly a hidden talent. If the two of you could do this much with Fiction, imagine what you guys could pull off with an original series- hopefully with just as much angst and whumping, lol. I mean, if you think about it, if you take out the characters names, you've created a totally unique universe. There's more than one supernatural based series out there, so you wouldn't even have to change much. As a matter of fact, it would be better if you didn't change more than the names and a few basic background facts (since Caleb is entirely original). I would buy it- and stalk the book stores watching for it, lol. Try changing the names, and then checking out with TOR Fantasy. They're usually up for the kind of talent these Brotherhood stories (and you could even name it Brotherhood!) put out. |
MDarKspIrIt chapter 1 . 12/18/2009 Awesome story. Quite beautiful and making me smile. I'm mesmerized! Happy holidays to you and your family. |
Death-Muncher chapter 1 . 12/18/2009 This was a cute story. I liked it. ] |
The Bloody Knife chapter 1 . 12/18/2009 Great story - loved it! I wish there was something you could add onto this. :) Merry Christmas. |
june08 chapter 1 . 12/17/2009 great story! |
kingrid chapter 1 . 12/17/2009 I really loved it! I love the Dean Celeb frienship. |
HAP chapter 1 . 12/17/2009 Oh just wonderful! I love seeing more about Mac and Caleb back when Caleb was younger (and great to see Bobby, Dean and Sam in there too!). Thanks for the fic! |