I LOVE that Kyo fought tooth and nail, and was then happy to give in...it just seemed to fit so amazingly well!

ah this was written so well... very nice and descriptive and intense once again. The fight was written down in a good way.

very 'entertaining'... although you just killed off Kyo...

but it's only just starting to build the mystery!

good job!

OMG you're killing Kyo! O_o

not that I'm such a Kyo fan, actually.. but still :(

Oh my god... you are brilliant. I loved the intensity of this. I don't even know why it was that way... I just felt it was so real and truly, it was very nicely written.

I can't wait for more! *off to read next chapter because I don't have to wait for more*

Oh please, please please please, please don't kill Kyo! TT please don't! D': though I am blissfully happy to see an update. xD

I'm a bit confused about the shinigami thing... Is Hyde seeing spirits now?

O.O No one's going to die, are they?

That was so sad... ;-; Poor Gakuto...Kinda ironic that he was the first, though. Always the trendsetter...

Anyways, great (but really sad), and very well-written fic. Can't wait to see the rest!

Ya know, it's horrible. Gaku is dead, but this is actually beautiful. Your mind is to be feared.

I love this story. It's short, and sounds like the beginning of an interesting thing, but it's sad,dark, and beautiful.

Thank you for making my night/day.