Why did you stop? Add more! QUICKLY!

This looks uber promising, and while I've just discovered it, since it's been so long, I almost wish I hadn't for it doesn't look like you'll be continuing. Ah cruel world.

omg. dude. WHY HAVE YOU NOT CONTINUED? come back! Dx

this will be good...

Wow! I so hope you continue with this, from this first chapter and your summary I'm hooked already. Great start, very well written.

interesting start. keep going please

Ok you got my intrest peaked. This is off to a good start, let the fun begin :)

This fic looks promising. Please do continue with it.

Man does this story look good. i just want to keep reading it. Cant wait for the next chapter. :3

excellent first chapter, cant wait to read more D

interesting. very intriguing. looking forward to an update.

woah, hold up wait a minute, let me put a word in it...hahah

Besides what I just wrote...this story looks to be freakin awesome and I do mean those words...when is the next chapter to be placed up...XC