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OstaraNight chapter 5 . 11/18/2019 This is so hot and good, and just great. I have read this a couple times (it's a favorite!), and realized I missed leaving feedback previously. I love how you have Ino as so much more than people give her credit for (a personal feeling a well) and Kiba is goofy but grounding, strong but also vulnerable. (Plus Kiba as Anbu is ridiculously hot.) I love the gorgeous roughness between the two. And the icing of the story is Naruto pranking and paying for it. Lol Wonderful writing and so glad you shared it! |
GinandJin chapter 5 . 10/9/2019 Hot! I had to pause several times to fan myself! |
izumii2703 chapter 1 . 12/12/2017 love it |
aleyaNSYI chapter 5 . 7/9/2016 Not bad...i quite like it~fukari |
Locked Myself Up in a Room chapter 5 . 2/5/2016 Wow so this was one of the hottest sex scenes I've ever read and thank you very much! I totally see this as being canon for Kiba and Ino- I think they would definitely have rough sex in an alley way, and the anticipation/build up was amazing ;) |
madqueeen chapter 5 . 10/26/2015 I was only on Chapter 1 when I just had to add your story to my fav's list. This was good take on Ino's character, really! Last chapter was dangerously hot! Thanks for the story. I didn't think I would get into this pairing :-o |
madisoncarr1 chapter 5 . 10/20/2014 This story... man. This story was so good. So good. The last two chapters had me taking frequent pauses during the course of reading it because it was perfect. And then the last chapter just had me, it was so detailed and so derailing, it had me literally on edge for these two. This ignited my inner Kibaino 100x more. Definitely a nicely done story. You should write more Kibaino like this ;) |
mischiefpuff chapter 1 . 6/13/2014 I seriously have no words for this. The way it's written is amazing |
gorillazspaz chapter 5 . 5/19/2014 Um, I'm going to favorite this. |
Ro0w'z chapter 1 . 12/30/2013 ooo interesting |
Crimsont3ar chapter 1 . 12/20/2013 The way you play your words is truly amazing... can't wait to read more |
MinakoTrickster chapter 5 . 10/5/2013 I found this a rare treat. I have never been a big fan of this coupling, but fan of both characters separately, sure. Whenever I would go to read a fic on the pairing I was just never able to be sold on the idea of them. Until now. Most people seem to forget that the females will have to face issues or missions like these. They are expected to use their appearance and sex appeal to gain an advantage against the enemy. It's why I laugh when people mention the clothes of the female shinobi and there are remarks of them being sluts. It's strategic. Anko and Kurenai wear things that are a bit daring themselves, so I was just baffled by claiming one female is a slut. Which is funny when you think of the civilians. They're rather close-minded unless it suits their needs. See Naruto. I can easily see them passing judgment on the ninja and the things they do for them without really thinking about it. After all, they do what they do for the village and it's protection. Kiba, he was everything you showed in this fic. Dedicated, loyal and one of the best out sniffing out the lies and digging beneath. He can be goofy and fun, yes, but he's an Alpha male in his own right. Or so I have felt. And to see him with Ino, oh man, you made me rather like this couple immensely. I'm sad to think that not many can write this pairing as well as you have. Thank you for this and Naruto did earn that, majorly. Keep up your awesome writing! |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/26/2013 Train! :D |
Taryn Myst chapter 5 . 7/27/2012 Wowzers. Intense it is. Very intense. I may have had my eyeballs scorched. Great job author! |
LaynieBird chapter 5 . 4/15/2012 That was one of best and most intense and perfectly written sex scenes that I have ever read. Ino's transformation from the start, and Kiba saving her was just brill. I completely adore this story and this pairing so much. You are so so talented, and even though it's way late, congrats on your baby! -LB |