Awwww. I liked that. Very nice. Thanks for writing

Aww.

This was really cute.

I liked this. It was a nice, though brief look at their life.

Very cute. I like the idea of Kel and Dom having a family, you should continue it.

Lovely :) And adorable. In regards to Ilian's name, I actually really, really like it. Generally I don't like the names people come up for characters' children, but I think Ilian fits nicely.

Great job!

~Annmarie

I liked it! It was sweet :) Their little boy sounded so cute! Short, but sweet :D

I actually like the name :)

That was wonderful and made me grin.

this is so sweet. its truly a midwinter story. you have a few minor technical errors but they arent noticable. the concept is realy touching. the writing really brings it out though, its not only the concept. good job!

I absolutely loved this. It was so sweet. :-)

Sarah