:P, :b, :D, :O, :T,
NICE ONE-

WOW! Well done dude with this chapter, I liked the Contestshipping part!

Huh? It was Ikarishipping? I didn't get it... Bu great writter.

Update update now... I want you to continue this story pls

I guess a vampire is visiting and flirting with favourite girl

When is the next chapter coming out? I want to know what happens next. Just curious no pressure.

Ok so it wasn't a perfect story BUT you certainly have a good idea and plot going...
All you gotta look out for is areas where you rush the story a bit and well... Grammar and spelling... Lots of it... It's just that, when you are talking about one thing in a paragraph and then it suddenly switches to a different scene it makes the story feel rushed but not in a good way.

As for some of your other stories... I read one of your one shots earlier (love tips) and that lead me to this story. I really liked that one and like I said you've got a good tale going on here... I also recognise your angel and demon series with contestshipping. I LOVED THOSE STORIES I read them a long time ago but couldn't find them again cause I lost the authors name... :(
BUT I've found ya again so no problems
ANYWAYS... Keep up the good work!

Btw... Sorry if this is a bit long...

where can I find the sequel?

Where the HELL is the rest because this right here is very very very very very very very good stuff

this is for the reviewer named "smartremarker"
You dumbass, no character besides Ash, Gary and Tracey have official last names. Berlitz is a fanmade last name.
AND Hikari doesn't mean Dawn, it means Light. Dumbass.

This is a combo of funny and cute. One of my favorites! Can't wait to see haw things turn out!:)

Pls pls pls turn May into a vampire in the sequel! I'm begging ya!

you have talent but what you write is damn confusing sometimes... plus can you nt keep people hanging on a cliff?!
whatever
p.s grammar and spelling please
p.p.s can you write the whole story

YOU HAVE NO

YOU HAVE NO TALENT