this is really cool and i really think you should keep it up and just keep doing this becuase this was just a great little story.

Haha! That was cute, I loved it when Delos realised that Maggie had gone into a pawn shop, update soon!

oh my gosh, that was hilarious! haha...i love the eight books i won't read and the twelve kicks in the shin!

WW

Haha aw poor Maggie.. Going through all that trouble to find the perfect gift.

But the end was soo funny!

MERRY CHRISTMAS! :D

HAHAHAHA wat a wonderful eve of christmas eve present. Poor Delos he just had to open his big mouth. I love this story so much its awesome. And Delos of course Maggies going to go to more pawn shops without you :) Update soon and Merry Christmas!

i love this chapter

the last part was so funny

but i would like to know what was their present for each other

Haha i feel sorry for both of them. LOVE IT :D

keep updating! please! this story is hilarious!

I loved it! (:

Especially the part where Maggie throws a book at Delos. .

Please update soon! XD

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww i lub it xD although i do want to know what present Maggie got Delos heehee can't say this enough...I LOVE YOUR WORK :)

~kia

oh i love it! my favorite part was when maggie got so mad that jez would be proud. that's pretty mad! update this soon its really good!

XDDD "Wait a minute. You went to a pawn shop Maggie! I forbid you from even walking into such a filthy, dangerous, and unworthy place again! Forget it! I'll just go with you when you leave the house from now on!" he called to the door of their bedroom.

"No you're not Delos!" Maggie said from the other side of the door.

"Yes I am!"

"No you're not!"

"Yes I am!" I loooooooooooooooooooooove that part!

HaHaHa! Aww. Poor Hannah! That would stink to be sick on Christmas..

Hey! Awesome chapter girl. Poor Hannah but at least Thierrys always there for her, so cute! I'm so terribly jealous of you for being able to keep updating my poor readers are probably going to murder me but that's life. Thanks for the laugh I should probably get back to my research paper... after I read your other new story! Update soon!

You are a great writer and you should be an author. Your stories are detailed and always make the reader have a clear reaction. This is some of the best fanfic I have ever read. I hope you post soon.