I really loved reading this story! You did an awesome job writing it!

Brilliant! I enjoy it! :D very well done!

Yay! It was a great journey. Everybody was nicely in character and I couldn't help but enjoy all the small and not so small bickerings between Mai and Naru. Thank you and great job!

Love it!

Oh my gosh this is so good
I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you for this wonderful story
Hope there's a sequel! I wouldn't mind making naru a little jealous in the next one hahahaha

this was great! I literally couldn't stop reading it. I love all you did about Mai's powers expanding and her stubbornness and Naru's lack of self awareness. really excellent!

Wow. This was too amazing to be true! You were really able to capture the different personalities of the SPR team, and didn't become OOC. I'm so excited to continue reading your great works, and once again you did an awesome job on this story! Keep up the excellent writing!

I'm not really sure what happened after the ending but I'm pretty sure I don't really want to know.

.rz

My goodness what an awesome story . I mean everyone is in character no too much ooc'ness and such
As for the plot
I love it amazing character development especially with Mai
And I really really really loved the whole concept of the story
I really did,you have done a very wonderful job in this story
And I can't wait to read more of your stories
So until next time
Peace ouuuut?

Oh my gosh. Do you know the pain u put me through here?! Was crying mentally!
Mai! Naru! Lin!
I love those dorks so much.
The fact that u gave Mai this development was entirely wonderful, I loved it. Mary was also very realistic. Kuddos to you.
The plot was extraordinary and well planned,not to add interesting. I just wish we had seen more of monk, though u did try to add him in.
As for the first part of the epilogue...I thought I was gonna lose it.
But haha xD I liked how things turned.
Thank you for writing

The buildup to the end of this is so good. I can't express how much I love how you write Naru and Mai. Thank you for writing this fic :) all of yours give me joy

Wonderful _ Very realistic. I really loved reading it. Thanks so much for sharing your idea with us.
Happy Writing

Good chapter. I thought you handled Mai and Naru's coupling pretty well. They both seemed in character, despite the shift in their relationship by the end. It's a shame that you ended it there because I would have loved to see what would happen next.

Things are finally coming to a head. /