Reviews for Unrequited
Guest chapter 4 . 7/1/2014
Is Ichigo on drugs
Toolazytologin chapter 5 . 1/31/2014
THIS!
WOW!
It's amazing that you were able to keep Ichigo in character (not many people actually do that), and show that she IS a strong person.
I think this is a good representation of how Kisshu would act if his love for Ichigo didn't drive him crazy.
Please write more fabulous stories, or even make a squeal!
Good job.
greatjobme chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
OH MY GOD. How could I have made this a favourite a million years ago and STILL not reviewed? Agh, sorry about that. Basically, I think this is PERFECT. I nearly died of awesomeness the first time I read it.

Am I gushing? I'm gushing. Ugh, I hate when I do that. But ANYWAY, I love this, and I also love the other chapters. This review feels kind of an anticlimax now, but oh well.

Anyway, I love this story and I know you've finished it, but I hope you write some other stuff like this soon. :3

iTaffy.G (Taffy Gregorovich technology)

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A Bitch With No Life chapter 5 . 7/17/2010
Beautiful ending. nya~
A Bitch With No Life chapter 4 . 7/17/2010
The alien was stood by his computer, hands poised over the keys, glaring at him suspiciously. Kish blinked innocently back.

I think you could have said this instead, "The alien stood by his computer..." just saying.

I know you told me no once, but we know more about one another now. Kish, you can teleport!

Now I don't get what she's trying to say here. nya~
A Bitch With No Life chapter 3 . 7/17/2010
'It's not your kitty time of the month, is it? Because there's no way you could be saying this if you weren't off your head.'

BEST LINE FOR KISSHU EVER! nya~
A Bitch With No Life chapter 2 . 7/17/2010
You spelled a word incorrectly, but that's understandable since it is Japanese. The word you spelled wrong was "sorry" or also known as, "I'm sorry" the word is spelled, "Gomenasai". Just thought I would point that out. nya~
El-Connelly chapter 5 . 2/21/2010
I cried so much in "come with me" but i cried even more at the end. It's sad but obviously I'm the girl back in his planet so.
Saba's Reflection chapter 5 . 2/16/2010
The end.

Wow! To be honest, I don't know where to begin. Well, actually, I do... I'm sorry for taking a century to review. I've become lazy when it comes to FanFiction these days (heck, it's taking me months to do requests for people) and I've only been bothered to give it a chance today. If I knew it was always worth the read I would have commented sooner, but I found myself seeing the alert in my inbox everyday, and contemplating whether to open the link or not... but at least I did it in the end, ne?

Seeing as I haven't done reviews in a while, I'm going to leave just one word:

Spectacular.

By the way, I think using the title of the story somewhere in the ending would have been more than perfect. The loneliness somehow didn't promise that finale... however it's still an ending, so I don't mind!
CatRock chapter 5 . 2/8/2010
...Wow.

I have nothing to 's how awestruck I am.

I don't think you put to many "...".I actually didn't notice it until you pointed that out.

Nice plot.I didn't suspect Deep Blue to turn on him.

And Kisshu DOES love Ichigo? I was beginning to lose hope.

This is kinda looking like the end of the that so?Please make a sequel.

Anyway, Great update or sequel this.
GlowingGreenEyes chapter 5 . 2/7/2010
Perfect! I loved this so much! LOVED IT!
Saba's Reflection chapter 4 . 1/29/2010
Before I even begin to tell you how... positively unique this is, let me just apologise for reading through the rest so late into the future. In fact, if it makes the whole ordeal sound lighter, I've pretty much abandoned FanFiction in general. To be honest, I came back to read this because I was simply bored!

But moving on... this is marvellous. This is the line Ichigo ought to have said from the moment she met Kisshu:

"'Stop TOYING WITH ME! ..."

The chapter reminds me vaguely of the episode where the Blue Knight is revealed to be Masaya. Whilst Kisshu offers 'paradise' in God knows where (presumably Pluto - just kidding), Ichigo offers two ordinary plane tickets! It's funny how it can differ between two species. And I'd love to say more, but there's a lot to applaud for and praise. I'd say the plot is working smoothly... when do you plan on continuing anyway? Because you've reeled me in now!
Saba's Reflection chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Seeing as you asked, here is my review. However, once I looked at your profile, I realised you had two stories posted during my absence, so I wasn't entirely sure which was the one you were talking about. But moving on... this was an interesting prologue, and so unlike many I've done. There is not a lot of description, but like a reviewer of mine once said, it gives way for the plot to flow, which it did. I liked the contrast you used between Masaya and Kisshu. There's Ichigo interpreting her boyfriend as she knows him, but her whole image of their future collapses after leaving herself open to a simple kiss. That simple kiss is what seems to persuade her that after deeming Masaya 'imperfect', she must give Kisshu the opposite [His name is Kish. He is not human, and he is perfect.]. I also noticed you didn't use speech marks when the characters spoke, giving me reason to believe it was a memory being relived, something like that. It was an excellent prologue, all in all though. The format is stuff of envy!
megzeeeh chapter 4 . 12/22/2009
Woah! This chappie was the best by far!

I loved it all, so much drama, I swear I was on the edge of my seat!

Go, go, True-chan!

Kitterfly xoxo
greatjobme chapter 4 . 12/22/2009
Best chapter yet! It was JUST like episode 45 (minus mews, Aoyama)but with all the roles reversed! Poor Ichigo. (

Hehe...never thought she was the type to steal boyfriends, and she SCARES me! Poor Kish ( what with the wall, and everything. Ouch, poor guy.

Well, that's all.

Happy Chihime

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