Amazing
And
Sad
why, oh why did he die?
Anyway, great fic I'm glad I stuck around.

thts so sad i cant believe he died

i hate you!

why did you make him die

you are the worst writer ever

you are SUCH an amazing author. these stories actually made me cry. you are so perfect at portraying the raw emotion of what could actually happen if someone had to go through this horror. everything was extreme, but realistic, making it seem as though it could be happening in our everyday world. i cannot express how talented you are, because i am simply speechless. amazing work.

i bet if you published a book, any book, it would be published because people, as i had, will fall in love with your phenomenal writing.

OH MY GOD!

this is so sad!

he was just about to tell her!

AMAZING story!

i cant wait for more of ur stories!

*sniffles*

That was so...SAD! *sniffles*

He died again! Poor Jackson. Now Jacksin is so going to kill me...

Anyway, I liked that, it seemed less "tense" (for lack of a better word) than the last two chapters. IDK. But it makes me think of my Great Aunt Melissa. She died in a car wreck.

*sniffles some more*

I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve. But please don't keep killing Jackson...of course, you're the author. Don't listen to me. But, it does make me think of Life4Fang day. LOL. The parody Fanfics...so wonderful...

But, I REALLY liked it as a whole, trust me! LOL. Of course, you knew that already...

*pokes Jackson*

Didn't you ever read "The Boy Who Cried Wolf"? Eh?

LOL. Anyway, I'm not keeping up with the giant leaps of time, but other than that I'm good. Now, to try to imagine a blood Johnny Pacar with a mustache...

LOL.

Now all I can think of is the Fanfic "Jeb's Magic Mirror". LOL.

haha!

i LOVED this chapter! it was hilarious!

mr. wu is so funny lol

great job!

i cant wait for more!

I'm glad Jackson was reunited with everyone again. He seemed to have gotten himself together in those 9 months, as in he talks normally and does not address people as Sir or Mam. And I'm glad Mrs Wu finally stepped up and welcomed Jackson back! I hope he stays with them and lives happily ever after ) Continue soon!

aww! haha

that was hilarious! and so cute!

i loved this:

“So, Jackson?” Taylor said. “When you gonna shave that caterpillar you got growing there?”

“As soon as you shave yours.”

hahhaha

*looks awed*

I love your Chapter names...

Oh, well, anyway. I loved this chapter...of course...but for some reason I can't help but think of another Fanfic with a charity-worked-type named Jimmy.

Except, he turned out to be an evil Itex worker.

Urm...nevermind...

Still, I feel so bad for Jacksin, begging for money. Like, those guys who used to sleep all day on the church down the street from my old house's steps. Half the time I wondered if I should've poked them to see if they were dead...

Okay, enough dreariness for today...

Is "dreariness" a word? IDK...

aww!

that was cute! jimmy is so sweet! i just hope jackson goes back to mel's house soon!

thats so sad!

i feel like crying after that last line!

amazing!

*pointedly glares back at Ghost*

I, unlike Ghost, DO happen to have a life. LOL. JK. Anyway, that was ROCKING. But, poor Jackson... feeling like he has to leave home...

Anyway, I hate the media... it's really more like a bunch of hungry vultures than anything else. Yeppers. But that was a weird metaphor...

I don't really have any concrit to give, not really at all. I can follow the dialogue, even if it doesn't show their named when they talk all of the time, I even understand the sort of gray area points (like, when Jackson is with Dakota) and I couldn't even follow "Frozen Fire" (by Tim Bowler, and yes, I read it, too) at some points. And, "Frozen Fire" is a PUBLISHED book.

You need to write an original piece and have it published, seriously. I know it would be A-MA-ZING. LOL. I had to type that word like that...

So, yeah... *goes and pushes the Submit Feedback/Review button*

Omg Jackson :-[ Poor Mr Wu getting fed up with him makes me sad. Contine soon please!