Beutiful, it is just.. beautiful

Wow, this was amazingly good! I loved this!

Gyah! That was adorable!

aw that was so awesome! I love it!

That. Was. Epic!

It's so sweet and sad at the same time, for Yami did not need to feel so guilty for his actions. He only wanted to help, not to hurt Yugi and make him feel bad...They were both in a critical situation that required instant action, and they both tried their best! No need to feel so sad, Yami, just show Yugi your pure and wise soul, and of course he will understand you!

I just love it, keep it up!:)

''There is a whisper that dances across my soul, gentle and painful all at once. '' that's one of my favourite lines! Yami just wanted to help Yugi win the duel, in order to save his grandpa...he can't be blamed for that even if it meant risking Kaiba's life, who would stop at nothing to get his brother back.I love it! Excellent work!:)

You really know how to manipulate a character and dive deeper into his personality, revealing his thoughts the best way possible! It is just perfect, I think even Yugi himself would congratulate you!:)

Awesome, you got the characterization down. Its going straight to fav's. Hope it continues to go well for you.