Reviews for Movements in the Dark
zeusfluff chapter 13 . 10/24/2010
Ok FC, so I read this a few days ago, but only now had time to review... WOW, this was totally dark... I cannot wait to see where you take chapter 14!

Update soon please!

Oh, and what'd you think of my preview for chapter 10 of A New Life? I'm still working on it... :)

~ZeusFluff~
zeusfluff chapter 12 . 7/20/2010
Heh heh, you wrote this for me FC? Daw thanks! I absolutely loved this chappie! Thanks for posting!

Update when you can!

~ZeusFluff~
zeusfluff chapter 11 . 7/14/2010
Oooh! A surprise for me FC? *EEK!* I can't wait! Can't wait to see where you take chapter 12!

Thanks again FC!

~ZeusFluff~
zeusfluff chapter 10 . 6/12/2010
Yay FC! I loved this latest chapter! I hope you update soon!

Thanks,

~ZeusFluff~
zeusfluff chapter 9 . 4/21/2010
Okay, I loved this chapter... I totally brain malfunctioned and forgot to review this, but I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thanks,

~ZeusFluff~
clintnatalias chapter 9 . 4/20/2010
I love it, they got married!

It's amazing, the most wonderful couple ever!

Please update soon.
MrSuperCzar chapter 9 . 4/18/2010
Aw... They got married! :):) I love this chapter!
ElleThom chapter 8 . 4/5/2010
how the fuck did i miss this? holy crap you got me whoa

well written as always but damn NOT WALTER!

ugh i am so gonna miss your writing
zeusfluff chapter 8 . 3/28/2010
Eww! Wow, FC! You went all out with this chapter... But you pulled it off well... Please update soon!

Thankies,

~ZeusFluff~
ocein chapter 7 . 2/9/2010
Yowzer!

That was a heavy hitter ElleThom. SO very dark and angst. I liked it...don't get me wrong.

Very emotionally provoking ;)
zeusfluff chapter 7 . 2/8/2010
Wow, what a twist! I liked this chapter! Thanks FC for letting Lilith write this... Dark and disturbing, makes the stuff I write look tame compared to this... Anyways, I cannot wait to see where you take chapters 8 and 9!

Thanks,

~ZeusFluff~
LoyalistEternal chapter 7 . 2/8/2010
Ooh ElleThom did a fabulous job on this chapter. Very dark and bitter, with just the right amount of gore.

-Lo
AguiD chapter 7 . 2/8/2010
wait! WTFH! they die? burned up by O? did i read thisr ight! !
AguiD chapter 6 . 2/1/2010
im sure you already know how wonderful your story is. and i was kinda waiting for an update on a certain other story before commenting, but well... i didn't want you to think i didn't read it and didn't like it (as if! you already know i like it.) it was very nice! and whoknows... maybe while you stay away from Fox and certain forums this week you can work on getting over your writers block. LOL
zeusfluff chapter 6 . 2/1/2010
Wow! That was amazing FC! You had me hooked since the beginning of the chapter! Can't wait to see where you take chapter 7! Thanks so much for sharing! Please update soon!

Thanks,

~ZeusFluff~

P.S. Should have chapter 3 up for Two Different Worlds up shortly!
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