Reviews for Love Moments
FavUYA chapter 17 . 4/10/2014
Cool
Salysha chapter 17 . 5/22/2011
A "drabble" is a piece of exactly 100 words. It doesn't mean a 'short, reflective piece' or any of the other misused meanings given to it. These would be qualify as "ficlets" (short fics).

Drabble 100 words.

Sorry, had to get this off my chest already. :) Now, this ficlet is a bit of a deviation from the others, with the Lee x Hwoarang shipping. The take was quite sweet, carefree, and romantic. Quite a few spelling errors, though, so you want to run this through Word's or even FF's own spell check.

The water mention got me chuckling, with the "water never hurt anyone" ...unless you down in it. Hah. Oh, and trust it to Lee to be fuzzy over his clothes. At least he dresses well enough to have cause for worrying! ;)
bagofpopcorn chapter 14 . 3/10/2011
Aw, this drabble is so.. sad. More so than some of the others (though the one with the head made me sniffle for quite some time.)
Salysha chapter 16 . 12/11/2010
You know what would be kinky? Making out in the closet! Might not want to do that one with a door that locks and can only be opened on the outside; you don't Jin and Hwoarang staying in the closet for all eternity. Gotta get them kinks straight. ;)
Salysha chapter 15 . 12/11/2010
Very sad, very touching. :( Gets the corners of your mouth drop and the corner of your eye feel selty.
Salysha chapter 14 . 12/11/2010
"[A]nd he bent down, petting his head." —Sounds dirty! You're thinking it too now, aren't you? Hwoarang can "pet" that head all he wants, hm-mm.

Spell check this one again, mate! Read it with thought. You had a few curious ideas in here. The confusion came from mixing up the words that are pronounced the same but spelled differently (homophones).

Damn, Hwoarang's keeping a zoo in there. A lab, a black feather, and Jin? Deliberately misreading this one, yes, but I am mightily amused!

My favorite fic so far; this was really funny and clever!
GlitterGoblin chapter 5 . 11/2/2010
I find this really weird... I know what I think of it but still would like to grasp the other possibilities of what the story meant... Hehehehehe

Loved everything (Except for that one dark chapter with death and all)... Everything went smooth and romantic.

Special mention to the "You Won" spinoff... It was a really comforting catch on the story...

Can't wait for some more... XD
Ren-chan chapter 14 . 10/27/2010
Ahahahaaaa! I had such a laugh with this one! Great job, keep it up. It's so hard to find Jin/Hwoarang yaoi,let alone as good and as refreshing as yours.

Thnx, you made my day :D
ScreamoDreamo 3 chapter 14 . 10/25/2010
Aww, lovely little story thingies.

I particularly love the Warmth and Cold and I really love the last one Tired, I now want a black lab called Jin _

Keep up the wonderful work doll i'll be reading happily

xoxox
Another-of-Me chapter 14 . 10/24/2010
It's to sad if Hwoarang must alone again. And his dog is a replacement for Jin? Is that enough?

It's sad, realy realy sad. But also great in the same time.

Please continue :)
STARGemini97 chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
that was just beautiful *CRIES*
Salysha chapter 13 . 7/25/2010
Makeup sex! Good idea that Hwoarang provokes Jin just to get a rise out of him and get Jin's interest. It sounds plausible, and the scene was hot.

I can't decide what I want the "prodding" element to be; I've two options in mind. I'm not thinking about the third, for some reason (probably because it reminds me of a medical examination). I certainly have free room to let my imagination fly free. I'm thinking of high up, whereas I would hazard a guess that you were down south? There. that was cryptic enough.

Suggestive scene, and anyone can imagine on their own how it went. Well done!
Salysha chapter 12 . 5/11/2010
Lee Chaolan, going "Excellent" from the back row? Oh my God! I shouldn't be surprised, but I still am. ;)

(Glad Lee can find such enjoyment in his adoptive nephew dating men, too! *chuckles*)

"Forever hold your peace." Check spelling for "peace."

Sorry, this is so unrelated, but at "The Accident," which I was reviewing just moments ago, I meant that it's a job well done on your part, not mine. Despite the sneaky timeline in the fic, you did a good job at keeping it together. :)
Rojo-Conquistador chapter 12 . 5/8/2010
Hurray for happy endings! I'll always be a sucker for those. XP I can't wait for the new ones. Please update soon. :D *runs off to read The Accident*
Dia-chan93 chapter 12 . 5/7/2010
Lee Chaolan "Excelent" FTW! lol. I loved this. I was wondering if they would get together at the end of one of these chapters. Good job I loved it!
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