Ugh another good story unfinished . I hate you people.

Oh my gosh this story is so good! Please continue if you can

Your fanfiction is amazing! I cannot stop reading it. Please do not in anyway feel pressured, but I cannot wait for it to be updated!
Thank you for sharing your talented work!

Well now they are together again.. I have to wonder though as of now she is pretty much the standing Queen why is there not assigned guards to her? You would think there would be at least a handful to see that she makes it safely to the Palace. I really hope nothing will happen to the baby, she doesn't need anymore loss in her life.

Thank you again for the shout-out. :D I'm interested in why they want Wynne's staff.. Hmmm.. Great Chapter! I'm interested to see if Teagan will continue with this group. :P Just to make sure she's safe. Hehe

First of all Thank you for the shout-out! 3 Made me feel all giddy inside. . Second of all, I'm not sure how I should go about criticing this. It seems fine as it is! :) Although I do wonder what those strange men are doing. Hrm! I guess I will have to wait and find out! .

As always I love reading this and hope you'll continue! :3

I really love this story and I'm so glad that you have come back to it. I love the fact that Teagan was in love with her since before Alistair died. He has been so sweet and I can see his feeling of both protectiveness but with a sense of wanting to move things along because he has wanted her for so long but knows she needs time and space. I have to admit though the Alistair bits make me tear up.

Awe, poor Teagan. :( Maybe their relationship may grow when they are apart? It was adorable though when he walked up to her twiddling his thumbs. :) I can'nt wait to see what is in store next!

I am so glad that you could post another chapter! You made me cry again! You truly are a wonderful writer, I cannot wait to read more! )

wow i really like this. cant wait for the next chapter :D

What you're doing with this... I just have no words. I literally cried all the way till the last chapter. It shattered my fangirl heart and and ... Well, it wasn't pretty. The thing is: you are doing a wonderful job, and I hope to see more of this soon. Please, do not discouraged by what the other reviewers say about tiny details. I am a hardcore fan of DA, and I find myself not being bothered by what you change. Have fun writing this, that is all that really matters.

I wish reviewers would stop being dicks and nit picking stupid nerd facts. This is a fan fiction and as such the writer has liberties. I really enjoy this story and I truly hope you see it through to the end.

I'm not sure why people are so pissy about detailed nerd facts for this story. It is after all a fanfiction. I think it is truely lovely and I hope you continue.

More! I am enjoying this, though I do tend to make some editorial corrections in my head at times. Perhaps Teagan could 'take' her hand or 'reach' for her hand instead of always grabbing? I'm following this in hopes there are more chapters!

Ok... honestly becoming more and more disappointed as the story goes on. Not sure if I want to continue. When you were writing, did you do any fact checking or research on the Wiki to make sure things were correct? There is no Arl Keiran in connection with West Hills. Arl Gallagher Wulff is in charge of the West Hills. As a writer, I might also push the boundaries of game cannon, but not when it comes to things like this.