Please add a trigger warning. This story contains child rape, in disgusting detail. As a survivor, i could not finish this story after getting to that scene. It's one thing to write an engaging story, even one containing such horrors, but forewarn others. Not everyone enjoys reading a story that contains that.

Thank you.

Why would Star Fleet not know what an officer of theirs not look like? Kodos was an officer, right? Someone on the admiral level had to be helping the monster . Someone was keeping Star Fleet in the blind, or reports of any kind from the Fleet!? I just don't get it. Kudos had to be making monthly reports to someone.
And what's really up with Winona? Terrible mothers can't be that bad. She's awful! Why has she not seen prison? Or something? She should not have gone free with just losing all her children in some way. And what of Sam? Why did frank never touch him? Why did he never say or help? He hated them too?
I find James being in this fix still odd and strange, but the explanation for his being in the timeline VERY BELIEVABLE! Most would forget about that shuttle from the Kelvin taken by the then captain. Very brilliant.
I am very much enjoying your fix here. Have you thought about writing any mpregs with this pair? just wanted to ask. They're one of my favorites.

Shut up, Uhura. You've always been a bitch

So many Mary Sues... they're EVERYWHERE!

Sorry, but I have to stop here. The plot is pretty good but the thoughts and speech of the characters is just so over the top and contrived that instead of feeling sympathetic for the survivors I found myself just rolling my eyes. I think with a beta and some reworking I could enjoy it. I like stories that deal with Tarsus IV.

... Twilight... sighs... angels... sighs...

I liked the story. Interesting that you gave Jim a twin sister. What gave you that idea?
I personally could have done without the Twilight reference but it is in the background so I can live with it.

This is the first review I've ever posted
And let me say this fic deserves it
It was well written but mabye in the future you could shorten some parts and make it flow better
And twilight is good and I like it but Star Trek is better without them tangled in it
Overall this is a great story
Written well with good character representation
But there is room for inprovment

I know this might sound a tad bit redundant... but you need a beta reader. There are not a lot of people who would read stories that are an eyesore and that might cause a headache despite the fact that the plot is good (I'm not part of those, though. I can endure a bit of mistakes and my brain has the habit of correcting it automatically, if I ever manage to read stories, and trust me, there are a lot of those stories.). The story has a lot of potential but I think...you need to tone down the OCs and, as I said before, beta reader (if getting a beta reader is a tad bit difficult or beta readers are rare...somewhat, I suggest rereading your stories and correcting your own mistakes and looking for misspelled words and everything). All in all, the story's good. ;)

I was totally going to read this before you gave Jim an unnecessary sister. No thanks.

I got the quest for Camelot reference there! Great job! Really enjoying the story. Honestly I can't stand twilight but you have some how made Bella and Edward enjoyable? Likable? Tolerable? Yeah we'll go with tolerable ( trust me that is high praise) keep up the good work!

While I love this story, I'm not sure if you stole Chapter 1 from Atlas of that author stole it from you.

This is my favprite fic on this whole site. No joke. Im tearing up. Som of that may be that its almost midnight, but still.
Whre is the Tarsus IV from? What episode/movie?

Best story I've ever read on ! Your an amazing writer! Love the story!