PLZ A SEQUEL IM DEAD PLZ IM HOOKED ITS SO GOOD PLEASE GIVE US A SEQUEL
Thanks-Alexandra

Ahhhh! SO GOOD! Also, my name is Alexandra so I especially loved it!

NOOOO! This is breaking my heart! I wasn't prepared for this! Though... I absolutely love it!

I can't even function with how much I love this story it's so amazingly well written and real and just wow. It's been a long time since I've seen some truely great fan fiction like this. That being said, in the earlier chapters there were quite a few typo's and misnommers. This could be easily fixed by getting an editor to give it a good once over, I'd even be willing to do it if you don't have someone you would rather have do it. I only say this because this story is already so great. On other stories I would just let it be and stop reading. It's only for stories that have an amazing foundation that I take the time to honestly make suggestions like this. You are amazing and I love this story, and have loved seeing it's success.

First let me say that I LOVE this story, it's creative and entertaining, you have a gift for coming up with dialogue that is very real and belivable. However, and I say this as a writer and editor myself, sometimes a writer knows their story so well that they miss things. I think having an editor look throught your chapters before you post them would help you cut down on the number of typos and misnomers. I would even be willing to be your editor if you want. This is an awesome story, and I love it!

You need to write a sequel to this story! There's still a story to be told here.

I'm glad she's picked Spot, but that seemed like a drastic character shift for West with no foreshadowing. I just feel like he wasn't previously portrayed as a possessive asshole who would even think to hit Alex.

I WANT A SEQUEL PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL OMGOSH HARRY PLEASE SEQUEL!

THIS IS AMAZING

Love it!

Yet again, AWWWWWW! Most stories I've read about Spot Conlon are about him absuing girls and his newsies but your story is PERFECT! Just the right amount of Spot and the right amount of love without making your readers roll their eyes.

Two words. Awwww and AWESOME!

Okay, I'm confused. I am also extremely sorry about the loss of this Chris dude and even though I have no clue who he is or why the NFL was at his funeral, I wanted to extend my condolances to you and his greiving family/friends. Secondly, my God, you are good. I'm from New Jersey and as you may or may not know, my county was slammed with a hurricane and I kept loosing power while I was trying to read your story. Keep writing!

SEQUEL. ;_; please?

AAHH! AWESOME! There better be a sequel. (:

But that was seriously one of the most beautifully written Newsie's fanfic's out there. This is definitely the best one. I love it with all my heart. Like I said... there better be a sequel. (:

-Emma