names of the characters are really bad and doest really roll off the tongue easily. :/

did? did Apache rapped your oc?! Jesus!

Not bad, but there are rooms for improvement and adding additional details like what his mask looks like or what his zanpakto does. But overall not, I will keep a close eye on this.

Hey, the mature content isn't unappreciated, but it takes up ALOT of screen time, and gets kinda boring. I guess I'm just thirsty for a less meek MC, his attitude is kinda meh. If his "innocence" remains in such a gory/violent universe then there's no point in continuing. Porn can only carry a man so far lol.

Ooh! I wonder what'll happen with Kousou staying in Las Noches with Haribel and her Fraccione. Will there be any future romance with any of the four at all? I'm curious.

Interesting start to this intriguing fanfic! I like it a lot so far!

I have no issues with the shincy and his lineage or powers, I like them. The story's setting, however, would be better if this took place before or after Ichigo or a story without his entirely. Still the characters and storyline is fun amd worth readimg still.

Final battle soon!

Great chapter and story!

Finally! An update to this EPIC fic! All that training and unlocking of power should come in handy now. Loved the spar between Kuo and Apacci, and how you balanced serious fighting/sparring with their passionate lovemaking at the end. It fits Apacci's ever changing attitude towards Kuo, I actually hope THEY end up in each others arms...

Wow! great chapter! I love how brutally badass Kuo's skills and power have become while dealing with the quincy leader. I also like how you added a touch of humanity, with Sun-Sun telling him not to let the killing/bloodlust get the better of him , and how Kuo seems somewhat conflicted about all the killing and bloodshed. That line about him forgetting his humanity amidst the gory butchering of his opponent, and the gruesome massacre of the Vandernreich soldiers by Hali-chan's girls seems to telegraph that Kuo knows what a brutal conflict the war with the Vandenreich is/has become ,and that brief reminisce on not loosing his humanity is made all the more interesting and makes perfect sense. keep up the great work Mr./Ms. Starwing!

Finally! Yet another excellent chapter to an EPIC story. Keep the good stuff coming, Qentix Starwing! this is truly a MASTERPIECE!

Great Chapter!

I like how Kousou became MORE powerful with his control of his Shinigami, Quincy, and Hollow powers have evolved.

The whole idea of Kousou Hollow powers is great.

I can't wait to read how Kousou will be against the Quincy.

I have not gotten that far in Anime/Manga of "Bleach", so I can't drop that many suggestions.

Suggestions

I hope that you keep Kousou Shinigami, Quincy and Hollow powers separate, BUT also keep up the work of Combining those powers together.

I vote Kousou to get romantically/physically involved with Tia Harribel, Apache, Mila-Rose and Sung-Sung.

That all I got for now. I might try to review again latter.

thank you for updating loved the chapter love the story

Nicely done... Good to see Mila and Apache maturing feelings-wise, I kinda like that. Then again, I'm rooting for a relationship between Kousou and them anyways, so we'll see if you decide to go that route... I'll enjoy it any way, but it'd be really fun to see it happen. Also, really like the new look you gave Kousou; you should use it more often, it's just totally badass!

P.S. - On a quick side note, I believe that the change in the Tres Bestia's mask fragments might signify a change in the appearance of their Ressureccion as well... Kinda like how Ichigo's appearance changed due to his own powerup. Just a thought, but it might be a place for some creativity on your part, seeing as I can't recall having seen their Ressureccions in the Vandenreich line yet...