Reviews for Just a Trick of the Light
Aservis Roturier chapter 1 . 1/23/2017
(channeling Mr. Burns:) Excellent, Smithers.
Blahblahblah chapter 1 . 9/25/2016
I love this story! It's the reason I paint my nails matte black. I have an association to matte black nails and this particular piece of fanfiction. I bet you never thought it would influence somone's life so much lol. But ironically I'm wearing matte black right now and the first time I read this was 3-4 years ago.
Elegy Rivers chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
Nice story! I like the ones where the servants interact with Sebastian. XD
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
This is perfect
FlorenceMeinGott chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
Wow, really loved this story! Gave me the chills. I always imagined the servants must have noticed something off about Seb
Major Monty the Straw Vulcan chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
I always felt Baldroy was more creeped out by Sebastian than the others. This was a perfect way of displaying that idea.
Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
Always wondered why none of the servants noticed anything weir about sebastian
It was really good
TNM-Writer chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Well then, this gives me a whole new perspective about Bard and the others! To think, they might not actually be total loving idiots!
kennydied chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
I always wondered how much the other characters know about what Sebastian was.
DreamscomeTRUEEE chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Great great oneshot. Loved the servant POV.
Hasunohana chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
just... EXTRAORDINARY !
FullmetalKeyblade-13 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
The world needs more fics like this! For such a long time I've been wondering if the servants of the Phantomhive estate simply choose to ignore the fact that Sebastian is obviously too perfect to be 100% human or if they really hadn't noticed a thing!
I really liked your take on this. Their understanding stares and goosebumps and the last part with Sebastians nails; I had also wondered what one of them would say if they ever were to discover them. A well-written and totally possible story! I wish it were canon!
Akumaide chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Oh my god I loved it! I really think there should be more fics like this, I feel that the servants get far too little 'screen time' as main characters in fanfics :D

I think you wrote Bard wonderfully. I love how he practically knows that something is wrong, but he just tries so... kinda desperately... to try and convince himself otherwise. You really managed that superbly :D

Great job!
malibupichu chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Damn. That was so good. Your writing is amazing, it really kept me interested. And the concept for the story was really cool. I haven't seen it done before. Awesome job.
HarlesAugust chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
OH MY GOD THIS IS GREAT! Can you do more of this? Or something like it? :) Please ;(
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