Awe, love!

I absolutely loved this story. It is so well written. I would love to see more from you!

Great story! It's difficult to write a 2nd person narrative, but you did it and executed it beautifully. Nicely done! :)

Good work!

Brilliant.

Simply Brilliant.

Wow! You really get the emotions across... even with Dean who we see through an exhausted, pain-hazed Sam, we can tell how worried he is.

Nicely done.

Really, really good. Any chance we could get a Dean POV on this? The lapses in time were so compelling, I'd like to know what actually happened. Nicely done!

Great Great Great...i think I'm developing a kink for sleep-deprivation stories :)

I'll keep an eye out for your stories!

L xx

Interesting story. I liked it

2nd person POVs are SO hard to pull off! But this is a sparkling example of when it's perfect!

Cool idea and great story!

thanks for sharing it with us!

Poor Dean. Always caring for Sam.

I'll take the next shift, watch over Dean! :)

I liked this story a lot since I have insomnia myself.

Poos Sam, only he could get sick while cursed and Dean doesn't sound too good either.

Great story and I hope their is a chapter 2.

Like the hopelessness, make one wonder if you have ever had insomnia too

But great story :)

2nd POV really worked here-poor Sammy. And I loved how we glimpsed Dean through his eyes.

I'd love to see the same scene from Dean's POV.

Beautiful. :)