Mm, pretty nicely written and I like the concept, but it gets steadily harder to follow. Past the point she decides to leave and get killed I can barely make sense of things. Also, stuff like rhyhorn should no more be capitalized than rhino, it annoys me that the nice god is male and the destructive one female, and I'm pretty sure it's possible to clean blood off fur. Usually, the issue is more about keeping the pelt intact.

The writing's definitely pretty, though.