Thanks for writing and posting this delightful short story! Poor Neji though... :)

How is it I read the first chapter and not the second?
"Too bad Neji wasn't there." Pfft!
That was a hoot! Thanks for the laughter.

HAHAHA. loved it! :)

LOL! What a great way to start the story! It so sounds like Lee; I love it.

The transitions are a hoot!

Neji! Shino got Neji? Love it! Yeah, my thinking is, growing up with Tsume as a mom, Kiba's probably impervious to intimidation of the glaring variety.

Aw! How sweet that Hinata is torn between her cousin and team!

Shino's logic is very convenient for him. Her fault my foot!

That was too much fun!

LMAO; I LOVE YOU, LEE! XDD

Brilliant. So amazingly awesomely hysterically brilliant! I loved it! I already told you everything I loved about it, but I'll say it again! This story is so amazing and funny and sweet. XD I loved all the hints of other pairings to, and I love how you write Shino and Tenten! And Lee. He's so sweet, but so, so naive. XD

Funny, although a bit hard to understand

...

"You were protecting my honor...disguised as a snow man?"

Best. Fanfic Situation. Ever. I applaud you. There should be MONUMENTS built to the Lee snowman. The squirrels, the Hinataness... and did I mention the snowman!

So yes, excellent chapter... BUT THE SNOWMAN. ARGH. .

awws, Lee is the cutest thing ever in your story! :D adn Kiba, oh Kiba, "the world has started spinning backwards"! xD AWESOMENESS!

~Dreaming101

lol Kiba! LOVE it! AWESOMENESS!

:D

~Dreaming101

When I read "Please stop dunking my head in the snow. I cannot breath down there", I fell out of my chair laughing. That sounds EXACTLY like something Lee would say!

You did all there point of views well, and I thought it was hillarious.

I love it!

so funny! i cannot wait to read more!

Hail of squirrels WIN.

*snickers*

Poor Lee! He should know better than to listen to Kiba!

oh my goodness! best story ever! :)

Aw, this is adorable. I like your use of sound effects to transition between points of view - that actually makes it way easier to follow when you shift perspective like that. Neji took something of a beating in here, both physically and mentally. Poor guy. He oughta loosen up. But I really like Lee's perspective. His mental voice was wonderful, particularly where he makes those mental assessments ("A perfect opening!" and "...wind up, aim, and THROW!...and miss."). So cute and funny and yet not stupid.

And then there's Shino using a snowball fight to get a moment alone with Tenten. Sneaky and yet wonderful.

So. I like it, in case you couldn't tell.