It’s a really great story. Hope to see it continue to see what happens

My guess is that this story will never be complete. Oh, well moving.

Oh noes! Such a good fic and it's incomplete! I need to know whats going on! I can't help but think that both Cap Stanley and JoAnne DeSoto need to knock those two around their heads a bit and make them see sense.

I do hope you come back to writing and finish it off.

Oh man u have to finish

I have read all 11 Chapters.

Are you ever going to complete this story? or are you going to just leave hanging?
I hate when I get so involved in a fanfiction story and there is no competition.

I agree that Roy should not have treated John so rudely; the
thing is that in so many stories, each time Roy makes a
decision that doesn't include John, he usually regrets it,
and defaults back to John. I think a lot of stories would
be better if the relationship was just presented more
realistically. I wonder, too, why Roy would not have tried
for Captain, if it was possible, without being an engineer
first.

Really enjoying this story Hope that you continue with it.

Enjoying this story. When can we expect the rest? looks at you with hopeful eyes.

I hope you get things sorted out. I would love to see this updated. I can't help but wonder why Roy thought Johnny made a mistake taking the Captain exam. When John wanted to celebrate with Roy about his engineer promotion exam, Roy had no time for him. When he called to see the children and just to come over, Roy again had no time for John and at one point hung up on John. Now I'm not sure what is going on with him now that he has made Captain, I think he pretty much told Roy he has no time for him. He took that foolishness from Chet while he was a paramedic. I can't see him taking that from his crew. Even Johnny, has a point where he has had enough. He can show you better than he than tell you, the foolishness ends NOW. Soapy water, and who knows what was on his face when he told them they have five minutes to get to the yard. When he found them still there, after he gave them an order, they had two minutes to get to the yard. I would have to agree with him, they had way too much time on their hands. They had time enough to set various traps for him, their hands must have been idle. and we all know what they say about idle hands, they are the devil's workshop.

Yes! I would like to know when chapter 12 is coming . I enjoyed this story I do feel for johnny. I wonder if Roy is going get off his high horses. Roy is getting pay back for the way he treated Johnny.

Is there going to be chapter 12. What comes around goes around.

Hope you can continue with this story. Would love to read more.

will you make a sequel or add to it.

I have read stories, a lot of them, where Roy has done severe physical and/or mental damage and by the end of the story, Johnny just grins and forgives him. I hope this isn't resolved in such a trite manner. That's not how real life works and while this is fiction (and very well done. I really want Johnny to kick Roy's *ss), maybe a more realistic ending would be better.

Hope you plan on continuing this story. I've been waiting for more.